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  FogCat says:
  Hahaha! I like it! I love how you built the suspense. Had me terribly curious. Then it took me a little while to get used to what the 'answer' was... but I really like it. I think the artwork really can stand it's own, with all your buildup. Good job!
  
  I'm not sure what I think of the ending-ending. A bit confusing, maybe. I think because the rest of your text fits so well with the illustrations, that that bit felt out of place. Something to think about.
  
  Good job, though!
  -Foggie

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  maddison12 says:
  loved this story bird you should make another

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  Nimby says:
  It took a short moment to get it, funny...and serious at the same time. Humor with a contemporary-issue twist - Good job

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  Tara16 says:
  Love this book it is awsome can you make a nother

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  Bryan4 says:
  Kewl book.

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  shnpswhite says:
  Good Job I enjoyed it :) Caitlin

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  ikvuse says:
  VERY cute !!! you are a great writer!!!

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  Nessiemo says:
  Nice!

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  amestarrulz says:
  Such a lovely story!

  Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  graciecat says:
  Hi. Thank you for all the nice comments. I have some other stories. Thank you again.
  Graciecat

  Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)

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