Rumble in the Jungle.
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Published: Sept. 2, 2010
Updated: Dec. 20, 2010
Total Pages: 30
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Hahaha! I like it! I love how you built the suspense. Had me terribly curious. Then it took me a little while to get used to what the 'answer' was... but I really like it. I think the artwork really can stand it's own, with all your buildup. Good job!
I'm not sure what I think of the ending-ending. A bit confusing, maybe. I think because the rest of your text fits so well with the illustrations, that that bit felt out of place. Something to think about.
Good job, though!
-Foggie
FogCat hearted this
loved this story bird you should make another
It took a short moment to get it, funny...and serious at the same time. Humor with a contemporary-issue twist - Good job
Love this book it is awsome can you make a nother
Kewl book.
Tara16 hearted this
Good Job I enjoyed it :) Caitlin
shnpswhite hearted this
VERY cute !!! you are a great writer!!!
Nice!
Such a lovely story!
amestarrulz hearted this
Hi. Thank you for all the nice comments. I have some other stories. Thank you again.
Graciecat