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  mark hearted this

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  adam says:
  I really like this one, nice job.

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  jertar9794 says:
  I liked it. Awesome job!

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  missK hearted this

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  mark says:
  Yeah, this is quite good Betty. I'd expect to find this on a bookshelf somewhere, lovingly worn and many-times read.

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  Rigel says:
  I just read Sadira her new bedtime story, she loved it! Her daddy told her not to worry, she will get better at magic when she's older :o) Thanks for the story Great-Grandma!

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  kendicott says:
  I think this one is very clever and Sadira should really like it too.

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  shishir hearted this

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  syar0403 says:
  COOL

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  kaye says:
  This is very cute, I've added it to my reading list - I'm sure it will be a favourite.

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  PinkkNanaxD says:
  iL this storyy.!

  Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  jeano hearted this

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  kennedyrose says:
  thiss... is uhmm.. OODDD.

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  annalog hearted this

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  Milli says:
  Another good one where do you get your ideas......

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