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  ClaireAdema says:
  Hi Mrs Dolso, Mrs Edward and my peers. I have made a new story, hope you like it...

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  apslibrary says:
  Great work, Claire. I can see you are really enjoying your story writing. Keep up the good work!!

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  mrsdolso says:
  Claire, you have been busy! I always enjoy reading your stories. Once again you have used a lot of imagination and really showed your creativity. Keep up your enthusiasm and I look forward to reading more.

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  ClaireAdema says:
  Thank you for the lovely comments, it feels really good to know that you really enjoyed it.

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  blueflowers says:
  That was such a good story! I love the ending. It was perfect!

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  ClaireAdema says:
  Thanks Katrina and Blueflowers(?)

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  GenwouldStories says:
  Great work Claire! Really creative! Did you make a couple of mistakes? Anyway Fantastic work claire!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  haru says:
  This is a really heart warming book claire

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  apslibrary says:
  What a beautiful story about a child's innocence, Claire. I always enjoyed reading your stories in Year 4 and now it's so exciting for me to be able to read your "published" work on this great site! Keep up the great work. I told you that you'd become a famous writer, remember?
  Mrs K :)

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  ClaireAdema says:
  Thank you so much Mrs K! Its so nice to have a friend and a teacher like my work! Thanks again-
  Claire

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  ClaireAdema says:
  To everyone on storybird,
  If I haven't thanked you personally I'm sorry but there is a lot to go through! So I'm going to thank everyone I've forgotten now, THANK YOU!
  -Claire

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  iceberg says:
  That was the best story I've ever read but I'm a little confused. Who was Layla?

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  ClaireAdema says:
  Layla was the little Teddy Bear-
  Thanks, Claire

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