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Wow! The way you wrote reminds me a lot of Dr. Seuss, and his poem book The Cat in the Hat. Great job! I really enjoyed it! I'm going to check out your other books after I finish reading the other New and Noteds.
@Spirit_Hawk I agree
@Spirit_Hawk I agree! It totally reminds me of Cat in the Hat, and I can't wait to see what else @wardsy writes!
@Spirit_Hawk Yes, I agree! I could never rhyme like that! :P
@Spirit_Hawk really good!
Really wonderful. Loved it very much especially those rhymings! So creative.. It was a great poem!
@fancy_dress - it was amazing I agree
What a wonderful poem wardsy!!! It did sort of remind me of Dr. Seuss, but in a good way! The rhyming was spot on and I loved the "cabbage root cake and barbecued beet" part too! Very creative, and congrats on N&! :)
Really wonderful and sweet story! This is your second story, and it's your second time getting in New and Noted... at this rate, I wouldn't be surprised if all your stories got in New and Noted. Gooooooooooo wardsy!
@luminiere goooooooooo wardsy
Thank you everyone, so fun to read all your kind comments :) @luminiere That would be exceptionally cool :) @boyinkm and @karthur I love D. Seuss!
So good, like it!
I LOVE THAT FROM CENTRAL
Wardsy, this poem is beautiful! It rhymed so perfectly, and the pictures matched as well! Congratulations on being under N&N! You really deserve it!
I really like this story !
Wow - that was just amazing!
i like the rhyming so so much
Totally one of my favorite storybirds that I have read! Loved it!
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Bettina Barcue feels lonely and starved for life's sweetness. She's tired of moping around by herself all day, and she's definitely tired of eating cabbage root cake. But will things ever change?
Published: Sept. 21, 2012
Updated: Sept. 21, 2012
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