Comments (12)

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  zahra says:
  it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo wonder full

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  StuCrewS4 says:
  I KNOW RIGHT
  

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  Nimby says:
  The part about the "you have to wait for a while after eating to go swimming" is so true. I used that line many times when I encountered a "inexperienced" ocean swimmer.

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  Kareem says:
  what do they have in common i cant find out,please?

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  Nimby says:
  They both can't be in the ocean, at the moment.

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  dramaqueen124 says:
  interesting story. I think it need something else

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  jacksonman says:
  THIS IS A GOOD BOOK WITH NO MISTAKES!

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  Betty says:
  Funny and very interesting

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  Random_Chick says:
  it's very funny. keep it up

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  Juliagrace says:
  that was funny!

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  FogCat says:
  Hahaha! They're right. That was funny. Good job keeping the interest level up too. I noticed something else they both have in common! They're eyes are crossed. ( :
  
  -The Fogganator

  Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)
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  Tigerdao says:
  ooo this looks cool :I

  Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)

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