Taking a bath

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  • reenola Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • reenola I LOVE LOVE your Storybird! Your rhyming is fantastic. YES--anything can happen when you take a bath and use your imagination. I love bath time with my daughter because I get to watch her make up stories about her bath toys and hear about all of the adventures that go on. It sometimes makes me wonder why I ever got rid of my bath toys. :-D GREAT job--so much fun!!!

  • fancy_dress Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • fancy_dress Really wonderful and cute story! Taking a bath is extremely fun. This reminds me of my childhood where I use to take a bath and play with the toys. As you are taking a bath, your imagination can go very wild and it can lead you to an extroadinary adventure. Well done!

  • juanpablodub love love loved it! amazing story, sweet, funny, original
    simply perfect

  • reenola Congrats on N&N!! I'm so so happy for you--you certainly deserve it.
    :-D

  • figment68 Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • jaden444 Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • jaden444 love this story

  • Flower5745 Dats kewl c:

  • Flower5745 Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • karthur Love, loved, LOVING THIS STORY!!! So creative and imaginative, anything can happen when you are taking a bath. This takes me back to when I was really young.... the good days... Hehehehehe! Fantastic rhyming andloved the way you used the bath tou=ys and the concept of bath time in general as an inpiration! Fabulous job, and keep up the amazing writing!!! :)

  • karthur Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
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    • 8 months ago
  • LinkinParkRulesXD Great story, make sure to read mine!

    • 8 months ago
  • StoryExpert BEST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • writer_smurf Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • writer_smurf Wonderful story! Gr8 job! :)

  • norwaybound658 Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • norwaybound658 Unique and wondrous! :))))))))))))))))))))

  • calyn23 Adorable, your ryhming is awesome!

  • josselle yeah it was OK

  • dnstu Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • dnstu So Rhymish I love it!!

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    • 8 months ago
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