The Dreamweaver
A child explores the world of dreams with his guide, the dreamweaver.
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Published: Dec. 9, 2010
Updated: Dec. 10, 2010
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A very cool exercise. I loved writing this verse to match the pictures. Great watercolors.
luna5000 hearted this
Beautiful and dreamy!
Excellent Gayle Bravo!!
I really enjoyed this story.
Thanks Luna. I liked your too.
Thank you Faythe,
cool Gayle! Love that story!
Thanks zoetman. Glad you liked it. :)
Lovely and lyrical.
-Foggles
figment68 hearted this
What a wonderful story. I really enjoyed it.
Thank you Fogcat and figment68. :)
That is just....... WOW!!!!
Lolz.
asiangirl hearted this
You have such imagination...great job!
Amazing! I understand why you're in the December Challenge!
It flows so smoothly. A nice, fun read.
jlb459 hearted this
sillybird hearted this
Gayle, your story stole my heart! I love it and voted for it!
Thank you so much everyone. I really appreciate your comments. :)
SiobhanK hearted this
wow! this was good! :)
Thanks so much for your votes. I'm glad you all liked it.
Good Story!!!!!!!!!!!
I loved your story it was really awesome!!!!
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Loved this!
Thank you maddieeash and capecodsusan. Glad you both loved it. :)
Used this artist for my last story. Love how the pictures can be used in so many ways! Wonderfully done!
Thank you mommiepj. I love her artwork.
Thank you 6MEH.
mommiepj hearted this
ABSOLUTELY AMAZING! I hope you are the winner! You used the pictures so effectively, and your rhyming verses were amazing! Such an elegant story! Putting it on my reading list so I can read it more!
Thank you for your compliments, Jaydesmom76. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had fun writing it. :)
This has an exceptionally good rhythm and a dreamy quality that makes Victoria's artwork almost haunting. Very compelling.
mark hearted this
Thank you, Mark. I'm glad you liked it. :)
AMAZING!
Thank you CaseyB1. i'm glad you thought it amazing. :)
bakeericee hearted this
This is so amazing!I absolutely love it. I don't understand why you didn't win the December contest. The rhythm of the rhyme is beautiful and the story is fantastic. It's so dreamy and deep.
Keep on writing!
-bakeericee
Thanks bakeericee.
Thanks for the compliment. I guess it's more of a popularity contest rather than the best manuscript that wins. Whoever can muster the most votes wins. :)
I added you to my reading list so whenever I need a good story, I can come and read your story. I just can't get over how fantastic this is!
Thank you, bakeericee. I appreciate your enthusiasm. :)
emma77 hearted this
AWESOME STORY.
Corpseguy hearted this
loved it! :)
Emma,
I'm so glad you liked The Dreamweaver. Hope other kids like it, too. :)
Corpseguy and HainP:
Thank you for your comments. Glad you both enjoyed the story.
I aboustly loved the book!!! What imgantion. You should win!
Well you are my winner.
MP375930 hearted this
:) aswome!loved it!
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Amazing story i have never seen anything better!!!!!!
iriswenger hearted this
great!! no wonder its a semi-finalist!
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Lions14AM hearted this
I love your story!
dragonwhisperer hearted this
Oh my goodness. Thank you all for your outpouring of support. I'm thrilled you love my story. I hope I win, too. :)
Thank you so much.
Oh my goodness. Thank you all for your outpouring of support. I'm thrilled you love my story. I hope I win, too. :)
Thank you so much.
daniellethestoryteller hearted this
These are the stories that I grew up loving-the simple rhymes that only brought happiness to nighttime tales. Well done! I hope you win!
fallgirl hearted this
I love this! It made me think.
superb!!
SMattox hearted this
That was great!
laney68 hearted this
Very nice! The pictures were incorporated well with the poem and the way the words flowed...It was very good!
YAY! You wrote a semi-finalist! i can never seem to even get last place!
Are you a professional? You made me think that you were
ag 4:
What do you mean by your question? If you are asking whether I have written rhyming picture books before, I have, but most of them are only on my computer. :)
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beautiful i love how you made the story match the pictures
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Letitia hearted this
I absolutely love your book. Its so sweet! You should become an author, because I would buy all of your books!
-Tia
This is a very cool book,sweet and nice :)
nice job & good choice of illastrations
This is really goodxx
soooooooooooooo good
Thanks so much everyone. I'm so overwhelmed by your response. Glad everyone likes it so much. :)
best ryming i ever heard
good job matching illustration and words
ILuvTech hearted this
Mrsmeredithj hearted this
very nice story
jocey hearted this
Lookes amazing i am just about to read it.
I love this! I like how it rhymes and goes with the pictures!! (:
mb182835s hearted this
That is a awesome story
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This is fabulous :)
My, oh, my! Thanks all so much for your kind words. It looks like Dreamweaver is building a fan club, over 1,000 views.
Hope it becomes a "real" book someday. :)
Thanks for your support.
deepfried_freak hearted this
Very good! Write more!
MrsRex hearted this
I love this! Great job!
Oh, so cute!
TheseAngelWings hearted this
i love the pics
That is one good story! It's defiantly going in my favorites!
RosieMcGrath1 hearted this
Very nicely done.
Thank you so much for a wonderful story. I am going to share it with my class.
Nice art work!
Nice art work!
Lance4a hearted this
i love it its amazing
from paige505's sister
it was ok
from paige505
solomonplus hearted this
so like totally great!
i love love love love love it so so so so much much much right another please
BEST i've ever read so far.
how do you choose who gets in the finals? Because your storybird was awsome and i want to vote for you.
Thanks all.
Lance4a--- It was a semi-finalist in December and it didn't win because not enough people voted for it. It came in second. :(
But I'm glad it's archived for you all to enjoy it now. :)
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greetprimary126 hearted this
I like what you writen!
I loved this book. If you get the chance read my new book called leave Now
unlike anything I've ever read before! It was amazing!
daleys13 hearted this
Wow i am a student from parsons down and i think this is amazing you should be proud of yourself!
Ok sorry you didn't win
mebarrera hearted this
Thanks so much everyone. I'm flattered that you all love it as much as I do. :)
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Carriere16 hearted this
Very Good!!!! <3
anushkagupte2001 hearted this
Brilliant brings tears to your eyes.
imcliche hearted this
I have a question who is he?? I don't get the story
this is great
zibbycomix hearted this
This book is so touching and cleverly worded, it is amazing!
I LOVE THIS BOOK IT IS SOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!!!!
christinenelson hearted this
You have a amazing imangaction great job.
jackwil hearted this
wow this story is soo intresting :) you sure no have to write good storys KEEP UP THE GOOD STORIES!! am looking forward on reading another story of yours!!! :):)
Khadijahh hearted this
I love this story so much!
Angel1121 hearted this
very beautiful story
carnival_kitty hearted this
I LOVE IT
Thank you. Thank you. A thousand times , thank you. Glad you all love it. :)
congratulations for such an amazin story!!
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa hearted this
Booksmith hearted this
I love that story! The rhymes are awesome!
Colezilla hearted this
I haven't read it yet... But I'm going to read it now 'cause of all the great comments! :)
OMG! I just read it and it rocks! I can never make the story fit the words AND make it ryme! Plus my stories stink... I'm not good at writing stories... Let alone typing them w/out like 5 drafts. :)
Bubblecat3181 hearted this
WOW what an amzing story it is so cute!!!
anderhun hearted this
lovely
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06flair hearted this
WOW! I LOVE IT SOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH! AND I THOUGHT MY STORIES WERE GOOD.......... :D
AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG THIS IS OSM!!!
cassidysmith1 hearted this
Wow, that's great!
you are an amazing wrighter keep wrighting!!
this is the best book ever
cool
amazing book you have to write more
vampire12 hearted this
I really liked your story, the words flowed very nicely!
Really good story .
:) :) :) :) :) :)
blantone hearted this
loved it! it was great :)
This is a beautiful story congrats :):):):):):):):) and my name is Erika
Emmasmith1 hearted this
Thanks so much everyone. I'm so glad I've touched you all with my words. :)
that was a wonderful story you should make some more
this is really cool lolz!
LissPennyH hearted this
Congratulations Gayle! This is a beautiful story!
this is very good. i loved it lots and lots and lots
Interresting! May i ask, is this based on something like a dream or from your creative mind?
wow! :D! I didn't know human could write such a good story!
missmoo
missmoo hearted this
i love the story.also like how it rymes.i also like the title.
emie hearted this
LOVE THE STORY THINK THAT IT REALLY IS A NICE ONE AND WAS REALLY ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I READ IN AWHILE!!!!!!!!! LOVED IT
really cool and fanstastic cool i like it you are amazing the best
Bluebootsblonde hearted this
Gayle, your words can touch the hearts of many, including me.
EmilyC5 hearted this
You did a super job I love it
chocolatechipcookie hearted this
Amazing, I love your technique,loved it!!
:)
:p
:>
It was way better then mine
KatieCWCS hearted this
i really loved it!!!!
AWESOME!!!!!!!
I really liked how you rhymed every sentence! It was sooo good!!!
Great Job LOOkan my account i have a book you can comment on
BRAVO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =D
Seththeyoungauthor hearted this
I LOVE IT! It rymes and it makes me wonder who crates our dreams? I think you choose the perfect tittle for your book! I know why you came semi-finilist place. Your book is brilliant! I am so adding you to my reading list!
cool.
odin hearted this
it;s great
this is so cool
thomasst hearted this
You should so make this into a real book Gayle! I bet you would win a GOLD MEDAL!!! =D
i love this book!
MoaWernersson hearted this
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mrbashir hearted this
Didn't read the story but you have a ton of comment. i bet it's really good
My name is Gaelyn and i am 9 years old.
gdoyle hearted this
every one read my book my parent divorce plz plz plz
wow, this is amazing!!! you should have won.... this is amazing so are mine... if only my English teacher would realize it.... but great job once again!! :P
It gives me a headache and i am very blur after reading the story.
Good pics and good rhyme.
That is a good book! ^^^ same ^^^
Silsopang hearted this
That was awesome! Do you have any other stories that you have written?
This story really opened my mind to imagiation and that, I find, can be quite hard to do sometimes. Thank you Gayle!
songgirl144 hearted this
Wow! What a great story! I knew I love it because it has over a hundred comments!
It was a beautiful story
You certainly have a lot of comments! Thank you for your incredible writing :) You've inspired my class of students for our upcoming poetry unit!
msrichison hearted this
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That is sooooo amazing Gayle! You are one of the best authers! I like the way your taste of illutrations!
THIS WAS GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!YOU ARE PROFETIONAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mpjones hearted this
Again I'd like to thank everyone for their comments. I'm glad I made you smile, think, and appreciate your own creativity. :)
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Cloversoul3 hearted this
I LOVED IT!
Congratulations!!!!!!!!!!!!Great book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
SamanthaMiduri hearted this
Wow, It's a great book! The words really work well with the pictures! Great Job!
feebiebubble hearted this
love it. honestly u chould get it published into a real book ud be a millionaire i know id buy it
kaykaykittykatgirlrocks12 hearted this
Really Good Book:):):):):):)
ipurfreak1 hearted this
i think that was a little good
Great job i love how you string your words together:)
heldergoncalves hearted this
20isabel hearted this
I love how it just moved along swiftly and how the rhymes were not pushing it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yoshiben10 hearted this
this is a very inspiring story. you are a gifted writer.
Wow! What a story! You should take that to an editor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yang6 hearted this
I like this story it is good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Plus read some of mine plzzzzzzzzzz
ReptoBoy hearted this
nice book
It is a fun book to read. It helps me relax and it is very soothing.
A GREAT STORY! I LOVE IT!
rosieposie77 hearted this
You should be a writer
Great story.
Awesome job!!!!!!!!
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julzb hearted this
hi
cutehamster22 hearted this
great job!
10MartinE hearted this
I love your book because it sounds realy peaceful.It almost made me fall asleep.
WOW! That is good!:)
mshen hearted this
cmdahn hearted this
It was wonderful and it made me drift of to space.........A.K.A...I LOVE IT!!!
becca27 hearted this
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rosieposiedoodley hearted this
WOW
ddfawcett hearted this
thejesspress hearted this
I love this story its grate and i love your imagination.
good
fshnmath hearted this
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Corey96 hearted this
so cool
o_o i love it!!!!!
Haq hearted this
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kelmac hearted this
SO SO SO beautiful I loved it, an absolute work of art!!!!!!!!!
squigley12 hearted this
Excellent story! I liked how you rhymed it sort of like a poem.
Gayle, I'm impresed this story is awsome. I have it on my reading list. Want my opinion? You should write more. Mabe my comment is not as long as others but I think you should know, I'm your #1 FAN!
PS. You might become a real auther, soon!
s19046 hearted this
Oh, and please read my story "The Palace Of Under World!"
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jan3y hearted this
Great!!!!I will Read this tons of times!!!:-)
every storybird is awsome in miss Schroeder's class and I love mine the most!
Rosalie_Stevens hearted this
Great job!!!!!
Great job!!!!!
cpescam hearted this
sarahs4 hearted this
i love it!!!!!!
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was terrific!
I just love it!! You are very talented!!
graceles hearted this
AWESOME!! :)
AndrewMal hearted this
This is such an amazing story, it is soooooooooo imaginative,I love the use of rhyme! I wish I could write as brilliantly as you. Could you please read my stories:
"Balloon ride", "Betrayed" and "Where are they?" Thank you!
Eleanor Baldwin 12
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LarissaCarbery hearted this
i loved this book
samlovesham hearted this
best book ever
I loved the water color paint pictures. You're book looks so REAL!
renee123657 hearted this
<3 IT
IT SO GOOD!
:)
IT SO GOOD!
:)
pepperlove hearted this
guess what? this is elegant and beautiful for a kids book!
Katelynbrooke hearted this
Gayle you are amazing! Like AG4 said, you definetely wrote like a professional. Have you considered publishing your other stories?
andysled hearted this
I can't believe how good you are at rhyming and writing such GREAT stories!
Keep it up!
P.S I'm adding this to my reading list!!!
Poppytropi_164 hearted this
Thank you all so much for your wonderful comments. I'm glad you re enjoying The Dreamweaver.
beckysian27 hearted this
Awsome I love you Gayle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MadisonSehion hearted this
great job, good illistraitons and i love how you use the pics to help tell the story i love this story alot great job gayle
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Wow, very very good. It's rhythm was amazing and the words swept me off my feet.
Musicgirl hearted this
FreyjaCartagena hearted this
Gayle I love your story, it's a complete one. It has rhymes and the story is fantastic. Kids would love this. I created an account here so I can make sure that I can read more of your stories!
Bravo! This is an excellent story!
mrkoolis11 hearted this
Finally! A good book on this website!
Julianna4r hearted this
You have a lot of coments!
This is a great book
Gamblia hearted this
I LOVE YOUR BOOKS
I love your books i am such a big fan of yours
baconbaby511 hearted this
Hi Gayle,
I loved your story. It was simply superb. (: This is one of my favorite verse's too. Hahaha. I voted for you in the compitition! I look forward to readin' your other stories. :D
I was also wondering if you would considering looking at my poem that I posted as a story response up there ^. That would mean a lot to me. Thanks a bunch! :]
~~ M'Lady Bacon
cool book
MathewsElementary hearted this
AWESOME!
nice book
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R_Valencia hearted this
nICE ONE
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WELL DONE <3
pinkprinsisz hearted this
COOL LIKE A ICE CUBE!!!
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i luv the rhyming!!
CougarAurora hearted this
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I think this is an amazin story!!! I really love all the pictures!!! :-D
Please read my book!!!
marymcn123 hearted this
like it
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2007gabbie hearted this
vwery cute
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Nele hearted this
Great rhyming job! The words flow perfectly. Wonderful! I enjoyed reading it immensely.
nice job! i like how it rhymes.
I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
really geat story .
19joller hearted this
i love this book so well writen
52899die hearted this
great story whoever yhu are
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YOU LOVE IS MAKE STORY
FROM JASMINE
XxXxXx
Its amasing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooove it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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yaron hearted this
I love it !!
You are simply a story weaver
You know, this kind of reminds me of that song, way back when, called "Dreamweaver" by Gary Wright. Does anyone else remember that song? I like it.
THAT IS SO COOL!!! how do you learn to write like that it feels magical
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