RebeccaWarnerI liked your story. I liked the layers of the story. I liked that the child acknowledges the pirate living in the closet like it is another article of clothing--and congratulations on your new daughter.
booniecatI really liked this story...it made me all teary. There is a lot of story in between the layers (like Rebecca says), and it makes it so much the better for it. Excellent use of the artwork to compliment the story you were telling, and I loved the POV.
bblackI loved it. It made me get tears in my eyes, and it was so beautiful. Just the right length. I would want my mom to come back from the land of dragons.
kaye This is an exceptional story from a child's perspective. I loved it.
kaye Hearted.
figment68 Hearted.
figment68 Wonderful story!!
lalu8s Hearted.
lalu8s I wish I could hear the Emmett song
lalu8s my mom says sooooooooo sweet
oliviaallen Hearted.
oliviaallen The cutest story I EVER heard.I wish there was an Olivia song.
PeterP Nicely done.
PeterP Hearted.
nataliewhite Hearted.
nataliewhite it was unusual and awesome!
adam Hearted.
Jordan9984 This is one of THE BEST childrens books I have read on Storybird EVER!!!!
-Jordan9984 ;)
P.S. It truly is AMAZING!!!!!
amazingstudent need more work at the end i did like it
matoaka incredible imagination and voice!
Tallguy Maybe a bit too long... call me a stooge but I preferred the more symmetrical Hero Within.
durbon Great storytelling!
Lauren4m That story is such a peaceful story. It's a great story to calm someone down.
Lauren4m Hearted.
RebeccaWarner I liked your story. I liked the layers of the story. I liked that the child acknowledges the pirate living in the closet like it is another article of clothing--and congratulations on your new daughter.
booniecat Hearted.
booniecat I really liked this story...it made me all teary. There is a lot of story in between the layers (like Rebecca says), and it makes it so much the better for it. Excellent use of the artwork to compliment the story you were telling, and I loved the POV.
CaseyB1
My middle name is Emmett.:)
bblack I loved it. It made me get tears in my eyes, and it was so beautiful. Just the right length. I would want my mom to come back from the land of dragons.
hmueller Very sweet!
radarcassy Hearted.
FionaWall Really nice story, you capture the hurt and love from a child's perspective really well! Love it :)
Nessiemo Veeeery sweet!