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The Emmett Song

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The Emmett Song
Emmett's mom is far away in a land of dragons to get him a new baby sister. He already has a sister. He doesn't need a new one.
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  • kaye
    kaye says:
    This is an exceptional story from a child's perspective. I loved it.
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  • figment68
    figment68 says:
    Wonderful story!!
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  • lalu8s
    lalu8s says:
    I wish I could hear the Emmett song
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  • lalu8s
    lalu8s says:
    my mom says sooooooooo sweet
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  • oliviaallen
    oliviaallen says:
    The cutest story I EVER heard.I wish there was an Olivia song.
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  • PeterP
    PeterP says:
    Nicely done.
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  • nataliewhite
    nataliewhite says:
    it was unusual and awesome!
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  • Jordan9984
    Jordan9984 says:
    This is one of THE BEST childrens books I have read on Storybird EVER!!!!

    -Jordan9984 ;)
    P.S. It truly is AMAZING!!!!!
    Posted 16 months ago (Permalink)
  • amazingstudent
    amazingstudent says:
    need more work at the end i did like it
    Posted 16 months ago (Permalink)
  • matoaka
    matoaka says:
    incredible imagination and voice!
    Posted 16 months ago (Permalink)
  • Tallguy
    Tallguy says:
    Maybe a bit too long... call me a stooge but I preferred the more symmetrical Hero Within.
    Posted 16 months ago (Permalink)
  • durbon
    durbon says:
    Great storytelling!
    Posted 16 months ago (Permalink)
  • Lauren4m
    Lauren4m says:
    That story is such a peaceful story. It's a great story to calm someone down.
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  • RebeccaWarner
    RebeccaWarner says:
    I liked your story. I liked the layers of the story. I liked that the child acknowledges the pirate living in the closet like it is another article of clothing--and congratulations on your new daughter.
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
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  • booniecat
    booniecat says:
    I really liked this story...it made me all teary. There is a lot of story in between the layers (like Rebecca says), and it makes it so much the better for it. Excellent use of the artwork to compliment the story you were telling, and I loved the POV.
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • CaseyB1
    CaseyB1 says:

    My middle name is Emmett.:)
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • bblack
    bblack says:
    I loved it. It made me get tears in my eyes, and it was so beautiful. Just the right length. I would want my mom to come back from the land of dragons.
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  • hmueller
    hmueller says:
    Very sweet!
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  • FionaWall
    FionaWall says:
    Really nice story, you capture the hurt and love from a child's perspective really well! Love it :)
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • Nessiemo
    Nessiemo says:
    Veeeery sweet!
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
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  • tak10822
    tak10822 says:
    FABULOUS!!! I loved the way you put a child's voice and feelings into the addition of a new family member. This is a very special story.
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  • JJbaker
    JJbaker says:
    Best story ever
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  • peabodygirls
    peabodygirls says:
    I might vote on this:)
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  • star1999
    star1999 says:
    FABULOUS!!! I loved the way you put a child's voice and feelings into the addition of a new family member. This is a very special story.


    KEEP WRITING!!!
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  • 047Mister3
    047Mister3 says:
    Well, aren't you the clever writer! That was so neat. I loved the child's perspective, not selfish but limited in expression. That was kinda sophisticated. Very cool.
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • hanhen
    hanhen says:
    hello yello jello i love i tto long im tired now but still good mabe to long 5***** look at ine please
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
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  • 3brian3
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    I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • fudgeaberry
    fudgeaberry says:
    I like this story. I love how you made the story really creative yet you didn't go overboard. The story made sense. I love the plot I love the imagination you added. I love it.
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  • AnneJane
    AnneJane says:
    beautiful story, I love it much!
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • sweetestthing
    sweetestthing says:
    My sister told me to read this. You had us as students. Can you guess who we are? I really liked the story. Did you adopt a baby? I can just imagine my little brother with a tummy monster!
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • sweetestthing2
    sweetestthing2 says:
    This might give it away. There are two of us! Loved your book! Who is Emmett!
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • Spearsisfierce
    Spearsisfierce says:
    Totally love it!!!
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  • OurClassroomFamily
    OurClassroomFamily says:
    What a beautiful story!
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  • italianprincess
    italianprincess says:
    Guess who this is? I saw the link on Liese's facebook. Great book! Love the story. Will you write me a song?
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
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  • iriswenger
    iriswenger says:
    made want to cry best story ever :)
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • HappyCupcake
    HappyCupcake says:
    Awesome!
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  • aidanrissa
    aidanrissa says:
    Great story! It was so sweet, interesting because it was from a child's view! :)
    Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
  • Cassb
    Cassb says:
    What an amazing story! I loved it!
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  • Rainbow741
    Rainbow741 says:
    Nice job!
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  • waphooy
    waphooy says:
    That is so sweet. So heartfelt! It was amazing! I hope you continue to write such amazing books like this one. I love it!
    Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  • luminiere
    luminiere says:
    Wow1 It was so sweet! I loved it!
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  • ttotoros
    ttotoros says:
    AWESOME!!!!!!!
    Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)
  • chickman4
    chickman4 says:
    that is amazing
    Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)
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  • dancecat2002
    dancecat2002 says:
    I want to hear the Emmett song. Badly :( :) nice story,though
    Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)
  • hypermew
    hypermew says:
    Cool
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  • Nele
    Nele says:
    Really good! Really!
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
  • FW30
    FW30 says:
    this story is great i will definitely tell it to my little sister:)
    Posted 5 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Marcus3C
    Marcus3C says:
    i love this book so much, i'm going to tell all my friends about it :D
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
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  • garage1
    garage1 says:
    ilove it
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    Moh19 says:
    iloveit
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  • cupcake121212
    cupcake121212 says:
    This is an AWESOME story!!!
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  • KCS12
    KCS12 says:
    I LOVE this. Wonderful job with this :)
    I would love to hear what the song was. :) added to my reading list!!
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
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  • wldchrism
    wldchrism says:
    Woooooooooooooowwwwwwwww
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  • 629231
    629231 says:
    Awesome.........
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  • boyinkm
    boyinkm says:
    Cute! Really cool!
    Posted 1 week ago (Permalink)
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  • Aqaa
    Aqaa says:
    This is really cool! ^^
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Published: Jan. 21, 2011
Updated: Feb. 27, 2012
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