The First Halloween!
This is the story of how Halloween started! Will the monsters and the humans ever get along? Read this poem to find out!
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Published: Oct. 30, 2009
Updated: Dec. 25, 2009
Total Pages: 12
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Fun read!
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This was fun. Thanks.
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Thanks for all the kind encouragement!
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Nice story
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OMG!!!! That was the best story bird I have ever read! write more!!!!! (p.s read my story: THE MARS ALONE. If I could get some advice from you I would be well......Honored kinda...Well you get my point I would love for you to check it out. My user is RolieOlie, check it out.).
nice:)
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I loved this storybird soooooooo much KEEP WRITING!
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im bad at wrighting storyies but your better.
What a fun Halloween story...
I love this so cool !!!
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THAT IS A FUN HALLOWEEN STORY!!!!!!
I LOVED YOUR STORE
Love the rhyme!
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Wow, this is reeeeally good!
I love it - especially the end!!
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awh this was so cute! i loved the ending the best:)
The rhyming was good!!unexpected. wouldn't think it had any kind of ryhming just by looking at this!!good very good.
That was a good one you rock!!!!!!!!!!!
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i loved it i think i will go and write one u have insyerde me to write good job
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If you liked this story, I have written a few more. "All about a Leopard" and "Primate Island"
Thank you so much for your kind comments! :)
Very good!!! Watch out for he disguise spelling mistake! It's not disqise! But very good!!!!! :)
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wow that was amazing you should really right more
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That was awesome!!!!!!
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i really liked it
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This is sooooo cool can you write more about some other people in your book but i still lllllllooooooovvvvvvveeeeeee iiiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttttt.:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)
that is a coooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool story!
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Hi! Thank you so much for you help. Thanks to you I am so writing another story using you advice!!! Thanks for reading my book and being so kind!!
that is a nice story and funny
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WOW That's AMAZING!!!
Nice! I loved the rhyme.
Very nice. Well writen!
Thanks for reading my Story!
I loved this story! Great job!
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THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOO FUNY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT WAS A GOOD LITTLE BOOK
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GREAT!
Nice work, loved the rhymes
I like the story and the way you used rhyming
I liked the book it was so much fun to read! :D
gotta love halloween
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hey everybody this was a very good short story!!!!!
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Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Wow! Thats SO good! I mean, I would be happy if I were even HALF as good as you! KEEP IT UP!
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That was fantastic
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Good rhyming loved the storyline!
nice story!(:
bridgetd hearted this
how do you use the art of more than one illustrator??? if you could please read my book Cheddar cheese afraid of trees and his friend Bees oh and thank you for your really nice comments.
THAT IS THE CUTEST BOOK EVER!!!! I love the last page;)
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omg like this is a cool story i loved it
loved the last page
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read my story's just search cody12345 and tell me if i need to edit it
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inever knew it started like that! very funny.
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nice wise tale
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cool thats was very nice
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Nice pictures you should make more like this
it is a cool book.
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OMG you are just so good at these storybirds and you just don't stop working.every storybird you do I will do a comment for.well most storys I will.Keep up the good work.Make lots of more storys and like I said before don't stop working.I've read most of your story birds and I think there great.The All about a lepord one is hilarios by the way.
Great Job!
Loved It!
rely fun to read. thanks for makeing it.
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OK
i love the imagination and effort you put into the halloween story
well done!!!
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cool story
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that was an awesome story
12 pages never done that kind
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REALLY GREAT!
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Cool idea!
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OK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome. I love this story.