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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 2
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 4
  
  Grade: 92
  Your plot is very, very good, with the exception of a weird jump between pages 8 and 9. Can you make that flow better? Also, the last page of the story does not clearly address the question "Is it better not to know?" I think you can clarify that better.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)

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