Comments (6)

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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 4
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 4
  
  Grade: 98
  Excellent story! The only minor thing is that the picture on page 7 does not fit the words/mood very well. Is there a better picture you can use instead?
  

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  mark says:
  Interrupting your lesson—sorry. Just had to say how enjoyable this way. Great work.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  mikefisher821 says:
  This made me laugh out loud. Very nicely written. Very enjoyable! -Mike Fisher

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaye says:
  This is a well told story all the way through. Short and sweet.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  rlobaugh says:
  Sometimes, we can be our own harshest critics! I think Victoria was being too hard on herself...besides, the birds seemed to enjoy her flute music :) I LOVE your story!

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  monk51295 says:
  Oh my. Poor girl. I wasn't expecting that ending. I wonder if she still loved music. I wonder if she kept playing the flute.
  
  Look how involved you got me. Nice.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)

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