The Girl
and
the Bear
A poem about friendship and the changes in life.
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Published: July 24, 2010
Updated: April 4, 2011
Total Pages: 25
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Sad about the bear though.....
I quite like this.
It is a dark poem. There's something bittersweet about it.
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Definitely bittersweet, SeñorBeast. :P
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I really liked this poem/story
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It is SOOOOOOOOOO cute!!!!!
kaye hearted this
Wonderful! The tone of the story fits the pictures beautifully. Nice work.
figment68 hearted this
Wow! Awesome story!!
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Presious!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I made some minor changes: cleaned up a few lines, punctuated this thing correctly (I hope), and made the 25-page limit. Whew!
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Nice job! I love it!
GREAT! Thanks for commenting on my story,!u rock at stories!
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Lovely...
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Aww poor bear. :) The story was sad and yet yes I find it bittersweet also! Wonderful.
AT FIRST, I FOUND IT REALLY SAD. BUT THEN IT GOT HAPPIER AND HAPPIER! I AM SO HAPPY THE GIRL FOUND A NEW FRIEND! WONDERFULLY WRITTEN AND BITTER SWEET!
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