The girl who wished to be a mermaid

Author:

sad

Illustrator:

Victoria Usova

Age Group:

1-3 years

jmikulski says:
Meaning - 4
Development - 4
Illustrations - 3
Mechanics - 2

Grade - 90
Check pages 6 and up - lots of grammar problems and typos!
Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
JCBCJBNW says:
good story

Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
mikefisher821 says:
I like the story you told with the pictures that were similar to the other one posted here. The Giant Wish Fish was a great addition and I liked that the rain changed her. Rain brings life--and now fins, too! I love it! Great job! -Mike Fisher
Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
kaye says:
i thought this was great - you really evoked the cold water and what she felt like when she missed home.
Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
rlobaugh says:
Nice group effort! Page 5 is my favorite :) (But "cozy" is my favorite word in the English language, so maybe that has something to do with it...she's all bundled up and cozy:) even though she'd hiding!)
Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
monk51295 says:
i always wished i could be a mermaid. i love your pictures.
Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)