Comments (6)

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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 4
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 3
  Mechanics - 2
  
  Grade - 90
  Check pages 6 and up - lots of grammar problems and typos!

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  JCBCJBNW says:
  good story
  

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  mikefisher821 says:
  I like the story you told with the pictures that were similar to the other one posted here. The Giant Wish Fish was a great addition and I liked that the rain changed her. Rain brings life--and now fins, too! I love it! Great job! -Mike Fisher

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaye says:
  i thought this was great - you really evoked the cold water and what she felt like when she missed home.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  rlobaugh says:
  Nice group effort! Page 5 is my favorite :) (But "cozy" is my favorite word in the English language, so maybe that has something to do with it...she's all bundled up and cozy:) even though she'd hiding!)

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  monk51295 says:
  i always wished i could be a mermaid. i love your pictures.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)

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