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The Goat Child

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The Goat Child
The tragic tale of Princess De, the goat child. I may revisit this story later and rework the ending.
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  • kaye
    kaye says:
    Epic, sad and wonderful.
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  • mark
    mark says:
    Gorgeous.
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
  • Ginger
    Ginger says:
    Thankyou both. I think I'd like to rework this Plotline into a much longer story. we'll see. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
  • gabbygoo
    gabbygoo says:
    love it so much!
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
  • SarahV
    SarahV says:
    this is a genius story. I think it is amazing and such beautiful language. I think this is just . . . WOW!
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  • sabie
    sabie says:
    so sad but very good i love it its fantastic
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  • TheMecklenburgs
    TheMecklenburgs says:
    Very depressing but it was in my top 3 story birds! I adored it very much!
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
  • Ginger
    Ginger says:
    I'm glad you liked it, despite the darkness.
    If I ever get around to reworking the ending, It might turn out with a happier ending. We'll see.
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
  • Herge
    Herge says:
    This is really great. Kudos!
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  • nanners1
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  • nanners1
    nanners1 says:
    This is an amazing story!
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  • abcd
    abcd says:
    I LOVE IT! It felt so real!
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • absurd_bird
    absurd_bird says:
    Oh my goodness! This is an amazing story. It is a tragic and sad tale, but it's so well written. I could not believe it.
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  • SarahV
    SarahV says:
    I knew you could do it!
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • adam
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  • sscherer18
    sscherer18 says:
    Wonderful Book!!!!!
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • jackcarlin
    jackcarlin says:
    awesome brilliant impeccable wicked
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • anyap
    anyap says:
    this a lovely book and a brilliant writr.
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Fluury22
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  • rhea
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  • qdevita18
    qdevita18 says:
    This was a great story!!!!
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • apandit
    apandit says:
    Hauntingly beautiful. Sad ending but unfortunately very true to life.
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  • weeter
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  • Ashalin
    Ashalin says:
    This is really quite good! I usually don't read medieval stories, but I found myself drawn into this one!
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • milanp
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  • vmrk
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  • Boo
    Boo says:
    I absolutley love it its so sad and just wonderfully written tell me when u win an award!
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • Cocoapuffs
    Cocoapuffs says:
    I didn't read it yet but i can tell that you worked really hard on it. i saw the pictures and i thought that they were really neat!
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Cocoapuffs
    Cocoapuffs says:
    I truly LOVED it WONDERFUL job it felt real and i LOVE your cover!
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • mia_parrott
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  • mia_parrott
    mia_parrott says:
    this is a realy brilliant story
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • mee
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  • sonali117
    sonali117 says:
    nice
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • littlestar
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  • littlestar
    littlestar says:
    that is amazing you should carry on with that as you said and turn it into a big book if it sells I'm a going to buy it and thank you for making this book it just a beautiful story congratulations I love your illustrations i used them to in the runaway you migth like it but it's not as good as yours but i think it's still sad and tragic if i may say so myself
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • bizzie2
    bizzie2 says:
    sad yet somhow thrilling
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • nrill1
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  • nrill1
    nrill1 says:
    That is an awesome ending.

    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • lazydaisy
    lazydaisy says:
    that was so cool
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • emrosec7
    emrosec7 says:
    You wrote a nice book. I can't wait to read your others. I really do hope you keep writing stories.Tell me what you think of my books maybe. Thanks for giving me inspiration. You're the best Storybird author. Like a friend of mine once said " you are a New York Times bestselling Storybird author!" Thanks again.
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  • mia_parrott
    mia_parrott says:
    your a realy good explainer this in one of my top storybird
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • singcb
    singcb says:
    so sad but so good you are amazing i love you! you are my hero
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  • boots2002
    boots2002 says:
    this was a sad yet amasing story i could not believe how good it was
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  • ou812
    ou812 says:
    wow. that was beautiful. it was flawless, i absolutly loved it! it went along so smooth...
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
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  • k8t
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  • k8t
    k8t says:
    To Ginger,
    By seeing this story, it shows you are an epic and genuine writer, and I spread my wishes and some luck to your heart.
    I hope we will see each other in the future.
    Posted 19 months ago (Permalink)
  • Meow01134
    Meow01134 says:
    starts off with depression and as it got happier it then got very depressing but I loved every word.
    Posted 18 months ago (Permalink)
  • lordvoldemort
    lordvoldemort says:
    This was extremely descriptive and interesting all the way to the end. I love every moment of it. It really grasped the true essence of love and life. I adored it.

    Please read my story bird!

    The Outcast That Was a Rose.

    I'd really appreciate it.

    Hopefully soon I'll be able to write something as beautiful as this. :)
    Posted 13 months ago (Permalink)
  • dtwilight
    dtwilight says:
    Excellent!
    Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)
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  • fireowl
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  • lynn14
    lynn14 says:
    i love your story...... i heart this
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Jula7
    Jula7 says:
    I just love that!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
  • nikagilham
    nikagilham says:
    You are a truly brilliant writer. This story is so moving, sad, and perfectly written.
    Posted 2 days ago (Permalink)

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Published: Dec. 27, 2009
Updated: Dec. 30, 2010
Total Pages: 13
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