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Oh gawsh, this was amazing. Every bit of beautiful to the last page! Wonderful Fancy. Amazing-?Described so beautifully! :)-?
You keep continuing to amaze me! Fancy_Dress, YOU are one of the best writers that I know! You used such descriptive words, just the whole placement of this was beautiful! Fancy, you have to be a writer! Just from reading all your stories, you can see that being a writer is in your blood! You're so talented in writing too! I just want to let you know, that I look up to you and all your stories are the things that inspire me to write better! Your stories inspired me to write 2 stories that got on N&N in the first 3 months of using storybird!! Fancy_Dress, promise me that you'll keep writing like you do! Your just such a fantastic writer, Im jealous! But in a good way, of course!!! Keep writing!!One of your biggest fans of all time, Bluebelle321
Beautiful story Fancy!
Wow! So beautiful! I really like the title.
Amazing. Such tranquility. Take up writing. possible descriptive writing. Amazing. Loved it but needs more theme.
WOW! It describes a splendid, distinguished,brilliant mouthful of majestic paradise!
@RoCkOuT99 - Thank you so much for your wonderful comment! It means a lot, thank you. :)@BlueBelle321 - Thank you soooooo much, BlueBelle! I love writing but writing isn't that much my talent. It's your talent definitely. Your writing truly shows it to us. Your stories are always inspiring, meaningful and beautiful to read. It's impossible to not lovee your stories! Even I love your stories very much. You have to be an author when your older. You'll definitely succeed! Aww, thank you! Your stories inspire me to write stories too and it's always a great pleasure to be inspired! You are soo young and already extremely talented. Keep this up and you'll be famous one day! I enjoy writing but really, writing may not be my talent. It's your talent, I know it. I'm jealous of you too because you are so young and already so incredible. Thank you so much! It means the world to me. I am a fan of you too and don't forget that. Again, thanks so much! :)@figment68 - Thank you very much, figment! It really means a lot of me. Your such an awesome writer! :)@danreines - Thank you for the heart!@boyinkm - Thank you so much! It means a lot to me.:)@hotdog_yum - Thanks so much!@Terlamaine - Thanks for the heart, Terla! @olive55 - Thank you very much! It means a lot. Okay, I'll try and fix on that, thanks. Glad you are being honest here. :)@Freya3P - Thanks for the heart!
Beautiful... really, there is no other way to describe it. Just beautiful.
@CougarAurora - Thank you! It means a lot. :)@luminiere - Thank you sooo much, Lumey! That means so much to me. Thank you! :)
@Terla - Sorry that I didn't see your comment before.. I think it wasn't updated yet because even if you post it, you'll have to wait about fifteen minutes until it properly gets published on the story so maybe that is why I didn't really noticed it. I only saw the heart though. Thanks soooo much, Terla! That means a lot to me. Your comments are always so kind! Thank you. :)Ohhh, tag game... I'll go check it out! Thanks for tagging me, it's always a pleasure to be tagged!
nice descriptive words really sweet
can i live in your story? hope i can see this kind of beautiful views in real world someday.
@ciccimad - Thank you very much, it means a lot.@Palidav100135 - Oh, sure! No problem. :)Yeah, I really hope I can see the kind of view too! Thank you for commenting!
That is a great story!
@Pattie1 - Thanks for the heart!@Missstorywriter - Thank you very much, it means a lot.@Terla - Yeahh, thanks for understanding. Your awesome. No worries, It'll take some time because I have a lot of assignments and asessments coming up. It's such a busy term for me. Thanks!
Awww, wow!Such amazing descriptive language!xoxohungergames13
@hungergames13 - Thank you so much, it really means a lot! :)
What a great way to explain and talk about the horizon. Now that I think about it, it really is a beautiful sight. :)
@511421 - The horizon is such a wonderful place to be and to describe it. Yeah, it really is... Thanks for the comment!
The Horizon is very pretty in my opinion
@jadcoo - Yeah, I agree with you! The horizon is definitely wonderful. :)@RebekahA12 - Thanks for the heart!
The Golden Horizon is picturesque and scenery...