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The Home Within

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The Home Within
We all have a home within, with the mothers and fathers who live there.
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  • challange
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  • mark
    mark says:
    "My mother taught me how to tie a million knots. My father gave me a pair of scissors."

    Perfect. Really, perfect.
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • jitu
    jitu says:
    Good thoughts of wisdom on parent-child relation.I like it.
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • missK
    missK says:
    Lovely.
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • Luciana
    Luciana says:
    Thank you challange, mark, jitu and missK! I appreciate your comments! :-)
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • 2000
    2000 says:
    I LLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
    IT GREAT WORK
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • Rebb
    Rebb says:
    Very nice, Lu. I also like how your story has a lot of jumping off points for discussion between child and parent.

    p.s. Thanks for introducing me to this wonderful website!
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • Luciana
    Luciana says:
    Thank you, Rebb and 2000!
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • purpleblob01
    purpleblob01 says:
    i like your writing and i like how the story is very reassuring.
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • happyhappy
    happyhappy says:
    THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER!
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • student3
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  • codla
    codla says:
    oh my
    this is so touching
    it is the best and i love it
    i will not be surprised if you do not
    become an author.
    You are soooo good
    I love it
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • codla
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  • cworl600k
    cworl600k says:
    thats so loverly it's really where did you get the idea from
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • Cymbleyn
    Cymbleyn says:
    I agree with Mark and I'm sure everyone else; Perfect <3
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • zibbycomix
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  • Luciana
    Luciana says:
    Thanks all of you! I appreciate it! :-)
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • ecrrepubublic
    ecrrepubublic says:
    Fantastic
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • Vans24
    Vans24 says:
    That's really nice! I made one like that a long time ago, i had made it in my old account, but it got deleted, so i made it again! check it out and comment! :)
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • Patt
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  • aimeefrancesca
    aimeefrancesca says:
    How nice
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • cdelf2
    cdelf2 says:
    This story just catches my eye
    I love it great ending
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • mamarai
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  • Lauren0701
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  • fun_having
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  • Jnicole
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  • samuelclay
    samuelclay says:
    Touching and clever.
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • thiskidisginer
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  • jellycartpro
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  • izzbizz
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  • SpaerklyRaine
    SpaerklyRaine says:
    A very good story to add to my reading list! I would be surprised if it didn't become a best-read and one of the favourite storybirds there are. Please do keep writing and please do keep touching my heart! :)
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • SpaerklyRaine
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  • twilightangel7
    twilightangel7 says:
    I love this story! I have a nice abstract book called 'In my world..' and I think this story is really touchinng.
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • dgoudela
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  • rkrs2195
    rkrs2195 says:
    This is really good I love it!
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • Luciana
    Luciana says:
    Really appreciate your generous hearts and comments!
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • piperpants123
    piperpants123 says:
    Nice warm story.
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • amceneaney
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  • student18
    student18 says:
    very interesting story
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • muradyan
    muradyan says:
    Great Job!
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • daisy8
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  • daisy8
    daisy8 says:
    awsome work
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • seldom
    seldom says:
    Simple and poetic, and it sounds so true. Love it!
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • awesome
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  • fuzk84
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  • adam
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  • henryetta
    henryetta says:
    WONDERFUL!
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • woof7
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  • Taylorswift122
    Taylorswift122 says:
    so adorable
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • KylieM
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  • cheeky_me
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  • bgamb11
    bgamb11 says:
    nice I like it and I think that I could read that all day
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • mc1999
    mc1999 says:
    I really enjoyed this it is really touching definatley on my reading list! Well donr=e getting it onto the featured list x
    Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
  • bettybennett
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  • Tandybelt
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  • sofiya05
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  • luminiere
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  • luminiere
    luminiere says:
    Beautiful. My favorite has got to be the one about your mother tying knots and your father giving you scissors. We learn different things from different people, that's a fact. And we all need those things to live and survive.
    Posted 4 weeks ago (Permalink)

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Published: April 22, 2010
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