fancy_dressReally wonderful story. I love the rhymings inside your story. It was very creative. The description was amazing. Love this! Very well written.
karthurWow soccerfrog!!! This story is amazing! Very creative, and the rhyming flowed very humorously throughout the pages! If I had on thing of advice for you, it would be to WRITE MORE STORIES!!! How can such a promising author have only two stories?!!? And congrats on having on of them under N&N!!!
fancy_dress Hearted.
fancy_dress Really wonderful story. I love the rhymings inside your story. It was very creative. The description was amazing. Love this! Very well written.
raibug Very nice!
czikimonkey Hearted.
czikimonkey Great job!!
figment68 Hearted.
figment68 Great story!!
Magarooney Hearted.
Magarooney Really great story! I love it! :D
tawnyowl64 you are in new and noted
congrats :)
tawnyowl64 Hearted.
writer_smurf Hearted.
writer_smurf Amazing! I love your creativity! Especially the rhyming!
writer_smurf Would you like to compete in VelcroLacey10's third community challenge? http://storybird.com/books/velcrolacey10-my-third-community-challenge/ Hopefully you can enter! Thnx!
(And for anyone who reads this as well. The deadline is 27th, so please enter now.) :)
merredith Hearted.
merredith Awesome story!!!
elspeth Hearted.
Trixi Hearted.
mightyfighty2000 Hearted.
mightyfighty2000 That was AMAZING! And congrats on being under N&N! :)
connorbo2012 that is a gret story bird :)
noesauces Hearted.
EJL AMAZING!You have got talent!read my storys?
EJL Hearted.
Libbylou Hearted.
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NishaW Hearted.
karthur Wow soccerfrog!!! This story is amazing! Very creative, and the rhyming flowed very humorously throughout the pages!
If I had on thing of advice for you, it would be to WRITE MORE STORIES!!! How can such a promising author have only two stories?!!? And congrats on having on of them under N&N!!!
karthur Hearted.
olitas Hearted.