The Lonely River

Author:

Ferinhator

Illustrators:

Irisz Agocs, Aaron Berchild, Pascal Campion, shishir naik, Chichiboulie, Aaron Blecha, bluedogrose, Pola

Age Group:

Everyone

A boy lost a loved one and is going through tough times. He finds hope in his loved one. @mark,@kaye, it would be an honor if you read this!

kaye says:
Sad and happy at the same time Ferinhator. A true story you said?
Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
mark says:
Another one of yours in New and Notable. Hmm. Maybe we'll have to get tougher on you ;)

So, what kind of feedback are you looking for?
Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
mark says:
Hey @ferinhator: I wasn't sure if you wanted us to read it (which I've done) or give feedback. You know, stuff about pacing, grammar, etc.
Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
kayla96 says:
I HAVE ALWAYYS LOVED YOUR PICTURE OF A BABYY!!!!!!! ITZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!! U ROCKKKK! (IDK U) yup =) cool story
Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
iverrallo says:
this is a realy good story! ^-^
Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
Mrodred says:
sad but hard to blive its true
Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
Mrodred says:
PS thanks for reading my story @kaye
Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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eandcswimbuds says:
Awww. That was soo cute. A true story, you say?
Posted 2 weeks ago (Permalink)
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