The Lonely River
A boy lost a loved one and is going through tough times. He finds hope in his loved one.
@mark,@kaye, it would be an honor if you read this!
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Published: Feb. 23, 2010
Updated: Dec. 10, 2010
Total Pages: 19
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Sad and happy at the same time Ferinhator. A true story you said?
Another one of yours in New and Notable. Hmm. Maybe we'll have to get tougher on you ;)
So, what kind of feedback are you looking for?
Hey @ferinhator: I wasn't sure if you wanted us to read it (which I've done) or give feedback. You know, stuff about pacing, grammar, etc.
I HAVE ALWAYYS LOVED YOUR PICTURE OF A BABYY!!!!!!! ITZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!! U ROCKKKK! (IDK U) yup =) cool story
this is a realy good story! ^-^
sad but hard to blive its true
PS thanks for reading my story @kaye
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