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The Lonely River

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The Lonely River
A boy lost a loved one and is going through tough times. He finds hope in his loved one. @mark,@kaye, it would be an honor if you read this!
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Comments (7) | Hearts (1)
  • kaye
    kaye says:
    Sad and happy at the same time Ferinhator. A true story you said?
    Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
  • mark
    mark says:
    Another one of yours in New and Notable. Hmm. Maybe we'll have to get tougher on you ;)

    So, what kind of feedback are you looking for?
    Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
  • mark
    mark says:
    Hey @ferinhator: I wasn't sure if you wanted us to read it (which I've done) or give feedback. You know, stuff about pacing, grammar, etc.
    Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
  • kayla96
    kayla96 says:
    I HAVE ALWAYYS LOVED YOUR PICTURE OF A BABYY!!!!!!! ITZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!! U ROCKKKK! (IDK U) yup =) cool story
    Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
  • iverrallo
    iverrallo says:
    this is a realy good story! ^-^
    Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
  • Mrodred
    Mrodred says:
    sad but hard to blive its true
    Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
  • Mrodred
    Mrodred says:
    PS thanks for reading my story @kaye
    Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
  • softballplayer28
    Hearted
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    hearted 16 months ago

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Published: Feb. 23, 2010
Updated: Dec. 10, 2010
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