Comments (2)

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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 4
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 4
  
  Grade: 98
  Excellent story! There are two minor typos/grammatical erros on pages 2 and 12. See if you can spot them!

  Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
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  jmikulski says:
  Nice job! Thanks for the corrections!
  
  Grade: 100

  Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)

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