The Missing Piece

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  • fancy_dress Hearted.

    • 9 months ago
  • fancy_dress Really beautiful and delicate with a lovely message. I love this. This means so much to me. I'm sure, most of us have a missing piece. Even I do! Just like your last page, after reading this, I felt like my missing piece isn't bare anymore. Your story is lovely. It's filled with great passion and power. You are a very talented and passionate writer. I hope for more incredible stories! Really wonderful work.

  • celtic32 Hearted.

    • 9 months ago
  • celtic32 I love this. It's so precious!!!!

    ???

  • stubby_girl Hearted.

    • 9 months ago
  • figment68 Hearted.

    • 9 months ago
  • figment68 Very touching and sweet reenola.

  • smiley316 Hearted.

    • 9 months ago
  • smiley316 Hmm...

    Kind of intriguing. I've never seen a poem/story that flows like this... or has the same kind of message. One of a kind, unique (in a good way). Accepting that missing piece. That's something I'll have to think about.

    Click, click, into the reading list this goes so I can mull over it some more later. :D))

  • 08dmacdonald Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • RoCkOuT99 Fancy said everything I was gonna say :P

    Beautiful....? :D)

  • RoCkOuT99 Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • mojoco11 Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • karthur Wow, Reenola.... wow. These are the type of stories I love to read the most. The ones that tell of times in life that mean something special to you, that tell you that even though you are one in a million, you are never truly alone. There is a missing piece in everyone's lives. For some they don't know quite what it is, but it's missing. I most certainly have a missing part of me that I search for, but it is still yet to be found. I really, really loved this story from the bottom of my heart. This is a story that takes me to seconds to see that this needs to be on my reading list, which it is now.I should probably stop talking now or I will fill up this whole page! Fabulous job Reenola! Can't wait to see what else you come up with! =)

  • karthur Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • boyinkm Great story! Very sad.

  • 8223EmilyH Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • XochitlFlower Hearted.

    • 6 months ago
  • XochitlFlower Such a beautiful poem with a very deep meaning! I love it soo much :)

  • larry_stylinson3 you really are just an amazing writer

  • reenola @ larry_stylinson3 Thank you so much! Your kind and supportive words mean so much to me. :-D

  • HannahL21 Hearted.

    • 5 months ago
  • HannahL21 awesome, reenola!!!:)

  • Terlamaine Struck me like lightning.

    • 5 months ago
  • mightyfighty2000 Magical. Like a purple unicorn.

    • 5 months ago
  • Mickey782 Hearted.

    • 4 months ago
  • writer_smurf Struck me like lightning.

    • 4 weeks ago
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