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Really beautiful and delicate with a lovely message. I love this. This means so much to me. I'm sure, most of us have a missing piece. Even I do! Just like your last page, after reading this, I felt like my missing piece isn't bare anymore. Your story is lovely. It's filled with great passion and power. You are a very talented and passionate writer. I hope for more incredible stories! Really wonderful work.
I love this. It's so precious!!!!???
Very touching and sweet reenola.
Hmm...Kind of intriguing. I've never seen a poem/story that flows like this... or has the same kind of message. One of a kind, unique (in a good way). Accepting that missing piece. That's something I'll have to think about.Click, click, into the reading list this goes so I can mull over it some more later. :D))
Fancy said everything I was gonna say :PBeautiful....? :D)
Wow, Reenola.... wow. These are the type of stories I love to read the most. The ones that tell of times in life that mean something special to you, that tell you that even though you are one in a million, you are never truly alone. There is a missing piece in everyone's lives. For some they don't know quite what it is, but it's missing. I most certainly have a missing part of me that I search for, but it is still yet to be found. I really, really loved this story from the bottom of my heart. This is a story that takes me to seconds to see that this needs to be on my reading list, which it is now.I should probably stop talking now or I will fill up this whole page! Fabulous job Reenola! Can't wait to see what else you come up with! =)
Great story! Very sad.
Such a beautiful poem with a very deep meaning! I love it soo much :)
you really are just an amazing writer
@ larry_stylinson3 Thank you so much! Your kind and supportive words mean so much to me. :-D
Terlamaine Struck me like lightning.
mightyfighty2000 Magical. Like a purple unicorn.
writer_smurf Struck me like lightning.
To Alex and to all of us who walk around with missing pieces.