Comments (10)

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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 4
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 4
  
  Grade: 100
  Excellent job! The picture on page 8 doesn't really fit with the story, but it's actually kind of amusing. Was that on purpose?

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  JCBCJBNW says:
  Of course
  

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  mikefisher821 says:
  I wanted to share that you've gotten the highest praise possible--from our 2 year old! I read your story to her on the recommendation of Mr. Mikulski, and she said, "I like this monkey, daddy, read it again!" Great job! -Mike Fisher

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaye says:
  I think maybe in this case it was good to know? Great stories overall - from everyone btw :)

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaye says:
  I think maybe in this case it was good to know? Great stories overall - from everyone btw :)

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  sad says:
  We like your story -sam mort
  I like how it involveds monkeys lol. It was a good story -anthony
  

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  rlobaugh says:
  Great Job! You wrote a story that truly fit the purpose of the task, while at the same time amusing your audience :)

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  TJC says:
  FUNNY STORY MADE ME LAUGH MOKEYS ARE AWSOME

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  JCBCJBNW says:
  thanks for the comments

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  monk51295 says:
  Page 8 is my fav - everyone is occupied fighting. Great choice of words - and of course - the humor in the illustration you chose.
  
  I take that back - my favorite part is that you have already thanked the people that commented. Makes me want to read more from you.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)

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