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  Wonnerfultigger says:
  I like all the different words you used for said. I always have trouble not just saying he said, she said, he said again, then she said to him, etc.
  I like the title too. Did you get it from the song, or did you just think of it?

  Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  boyinkm says:
  I got the title from the song, but I thought of using it for a title from the picture on the cover.

  Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  figment68 hearted this

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  figment68 says:
  Great adventure story! Have you thought about entering lalahead316's storybird community challenge? The theme is adventure.

  Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  boyinkm says:
  I've already entered my two stories for the community challenge. This wasn't one of them, however. I entered What Elephants do on a Warm Night Adventure, and Where are You Taking Me?

  Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)

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