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  chooki says:
  i love love love love love love love love it

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  kellyd says:
  haah thanks! i rushed the ending a little because otherwise i thought it would be too long haha it's already long enough!

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  mark hearted this

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  kaye hearted this

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  kaye says:
  Not too long at all Kellyd, I thought it was great, and you really worked with the art to tell the story nicely. Would love to see more like this.

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  missK hearted this

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  sophiiieestory says:
  I THINK THIS WAS FANTASICE

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  kellyd says:
  Thanks so much, i just wish i hadnt rushed the ending haha. But thank you again for your comments:)

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  Sleepyteddy9 says:
  it was so sweet and i liked the part with the mermaid

  Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)

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