smiley316
says:
O my goldfish with cherry toppings!!! I had an awesomelicioustgooshed idea for a storybird! it is marveloubravo! Okay I don't know if I should make it or not... i need your guys's feedback on whether or not you want to be in it or not... okay???
So, it is called, MY GROUPIES!!! (by smiley316)
then it is all like, this is my group of 'buds' on storybird... i guess we are like regulars to each other, always commenting on one anothers stories.... so here they are! *that will be like the first page and then it goes on to talk about people like baconbaby511, lemonade5678, bookloverjoy, cookie54lover, deepfried_freak, blah blah blah blah blah (if you get this comment then you will be in it, k?)
so let me know if that is good with yall or not... i don't wanna say you are my groupies if you arent, k?
PEACE AND JUST RESPOND BACK TO MOI QUICKLY SO I CAN GET IT DONE, K???? :) (.)_(.)
Smiley
figment68 hearted this
Great story! I like the name Silver.
Me, too! Thanks!
Awesome story, I loved it!
Hi, deepfried_freak, I believe you don't know me but my cousin Smiley said to check you out.... I believe you might know her username, smiley316??? :) :) :)
Awesome story!
Peace, Jojo
Jojo_Mojo hearted this
O my goldfish with cherry toppings!!! I had an awesomelicioustgooshed idea for a storybird! it is marveloubravo! Okay I don't know if I should make it or not... i need your guys's feedback on whether or not you want to be in it or not... okay???
So, it is called, MY GROUPIES!!! (by smiley316)
then it is all like, this is my group of 'buds' on storybird... i guess we are like regulars to each other, always commenting on one anothers stories.... so here they are! *that will be like the first page and then it goes on to talk about people like baconbaby511, lemonade5678, bookloverjoy, cookie54lover, deepfried_freak, blah blah blah blah blah (if you get this comment then you will be in it, k?)
so let me know if that is good with yall or not... i don't wanna say you are my groupies if you arent, k?
PEACE AND JUST RESPOND BACK TO MOI QUICKLY SO I CAN GET IT DONE, K???? :) (.)_(.)
Smiley
Thanks for the heart Jojo_Mojo!
Oh- I almost forgot. This story series was inspired by Brandon Mull's book "Fablehaven-Grip of the Shadow Plague". It's book three in the Fablehaven series.
Yeah I thought it was... I have read all of those books and I am waiting for him to start this new series he was talking about. Fablehaven was an awesome series. O.o One of my fave books is the fourth one... (I cant remember the name of it) Its the one where Kendra is replaced by a stingbulb :)
Jojo_Mojo -> Hey, thanks! Good to meet you! (In a way.) Yeah, I know smiley. :) Thanks for checking me out!
smiley316 -> Thanks! And great idea!
Can't wait till the next part!
luminiere hearted this
my cousin Jojo and I are making sort of a talk show. No worries, it is nothing like a quiz show. It's sort of just basically an interview, where we interview different people and ask them random questions, like, 'if you had a choice between lasagna and spaghetti, what would you choose?' sort of random like that. ( i do most of the thinking, jojo does the talking) just respond back to us on either of our storybirds, or right here if you want to... be sure to reply quickly, because a new one comes out each week, and there will hopefully be a lot of episodes!!!
Peace
~Smiley
luminiere -> Thanks!
smiley316 -> Okay! :)
bookloverjoy hearted this
That was just AMAZING!!!!! WOW!!! *adds to reading list* I CAN'T WAIT for the next one!!! Tell me when it's out!!! Oh, and I LOVE the name Silver, by the way...
And that's happened to me in a dream before, when something was coming for me...and I couldn't move, I couldn't scream...*shudders* ANYWAY, I LOVED IT!!! I hope the next one is just as good!!!
Hey yall!!! Smiley here (.)_(.) I got more stories for you! Like, nine of them or something… I got bored again and created a torrent of storybirds for all of you guys to read!! You don’t have to look at all of them, just the ones that spark your interest
http://storybird.com/books/is-there-something-wrong-with-me-2/
http://storybird.com/books/interviews-ep-1/
http://storybird.com/books/a-puppet-on-a-string/
http://storybird.com/books/the-one-hundred-letter-story/
http://storybird.com/books/braces-10/
http://storybird.com/books/ode-to-randomness/
http://storybird.com/books/stay-strong-in-these-moments-of-pain/
http://storybird.com/books/i-wonder-80/
Enjoy everyone!!! Mwahaha! If you want you can pass on the word… I don’t really care! I ♥ya!
~sMiLeY~ O.o
I see Smiley already told you about the talk show idea :xD
Can't wait for the next book!
Rainbow741 hearted this
This storybird is really great!It's going on m reading list.Also.......MAKE THE SECOND PART ALREADY!!!!!!!Please?
sjspain hearted this
bookloverjoy -> Aww... Thanks! So glad you liked it!
smiley316 -> Okay, I'll read them when I get enough time!! :)
Jojo_Mojo -> Yah... :)
Rainbow741 -> Thanks! Me either! :)
sjspain -> Haha, thanks! I'll start writing! :)
Sorry, that was a lot of stories... oops? I got bored and just wrote and wrote and wrote. :D
Nice story deepfried_freak! I'm going to use this within my classroom - that's if you don't mind - as I'm teaching a module on The Gothic in September. This story is very much a hybrid between Gothic and Fantasy: perfect! I loved the way up built up anticipation and left us in suspense at the end.
I'm adding this to my reading list.
Well Done!
TAS
tanyaattewellsmith hearted this
smiley316 ->Yeah, I know what you mean... :D
Thanks for the heart tanyaattewellsmith!
Aww... Thanks TAS! I don't mind if you use it in your class, in fact, I'm honored! I hope they like it!
euntalan -> Thanks! I'm working on number two, so keep your eyes open!
baconbaby511 hearted this
Intense in a not so intense but felt tense way. :P Aka that was really awesome. XD Write part two, per favor? ;D
MAKE NUMBER TWO!!!
Yeah, I'm the one talking...I have, like, at least eight stories unpublished right now!! Haha!! :)
Just read that once more.... for some reason the line 'they were blinded by their own fear' stuck out to me even more than the other parts. It was just brilliant. make part 2!
You better continue..... it's too awesome not to continue.
bacon -> Thanks! Number two is almost done! I'm so excited!!! :)
bookloverjoy -> Yeah, I have several unfinished stories, yoo. Thanks!
smiley -> Yeah, that's one of my favorite lines... :) Thanks for commenting again! xD
Klu8921 -> Thank you so much!!! xD
Julianna4r hearted this
Thanks for the heart Julianna4r!
OMG UR AN AMAZING STORYBIRD WRITER AND UR JUST PLAIN AWESOME!!!!! i luv this story! btw, is this ganna be a book series????write more of these! theyre awesome!!!!!!!! and can u read some of my books? thx!
abrennan hearted this
Wow, thanks! Yes, it's going to be a book series. And sure, I'll read your stories! :)
As ya know, I am a huge fan of you, freakster. So I don't know why this is the first time I'm reading them!! Anyway, it was amazing, fantastic, faboulous, thrilling, and very, very exciting!!! Keep it up!
celtic32 hearted this
celtic -> Aw... shucks... *blushes* You're too kind...
Thanks so much!! :)
You're welcome!
xD
I really thought the story was better than my creepie cutie stories. I loved it so much, put it on my book shelf!
mrgerman -> Thanks so much! Im glad you lked it so! :)
The suspense...
;D Yeah... Thanks!!
Nele hearted this
That was great!
Nele -> Thanks so much!!
amazing story freak!
alexjane101 hearted this
Thanks so much!! You rock alexjane101!!
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Luckyboy22 hearted this
Wow deepfried, I just got into this series, and it is totally amazing:) I know it's a little late for commenting on this story but I really like it. I cant wait to read 2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10, and 11 because I know you have made all of them. :) This will keep me entertained lol :)
Owlcityowls hearted this
I LOVE THE BOOK IT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOD. I have read all of them and can't wait for the next one. I am making a book about creatures called Nymphs and they hate humans and humans because trying to capture them. Then the king nymph's daughter try's to get along with the humans and falls in love with one of the human prisoners. Ounce I get it published you should cheak it out I think you would like it. I added all the shadow wars books to my reading list so I can read them whenever I want to. :)
Owlcityowls :)
P.S. The book is called, Exania Nymphs
Thanks for the heart Carson... and SBacher!!
Luckyboy -> Thanks!! I'm glad you like 'em! (:
Owlcitowls -> (: Thanks!!And your book sounds so good! I cannot wait to read it! Just be sure to let me know when it's out, okay?
okay. I messed up on some of the wording in the comment. I am going to make all the books, and then publish them all at once. P.s Do you think my new avatar is cute?
owlcityowls -> Oh, alright then. (: And yeah, your avatar is marvelous and cute!!! (:
Thank you!
Oooooooooooooooh!!!!!! GOOOODY!!! Answer me this though- How old do you have to be to have an artist account??? I want to get one, but I'm not sure how old you have to be.
Hi deepfried_freak!!!!! It's me, Owlcityowls. I was just commenting to inform you that my book, Exania Nymphs I has just been published and will soon be out to read.
Your friend and lover of these shadow war books,
Owlcityowls
smartcookie2 hearted this
nice story!
The book that started it all... xD
you offially have me hooked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Fairoozn hearted this
Holley Cow! You updated them all! Or mostly all.
I cannot believe I'm just now reading this series! :) Very well written. Spooky... Reminds me a bit of the Phantom of the Opera.
stubby_girl hearted this
Oh my gosh! This was amazing deepfried_freak! Amazing! You drew me in with the first sentence and all the detail and words you used made me fee like I was really there! I wish I could check it out at a libary and keep if forever! This is simply amazing! I am out of words to describe what you have typed for this seris! It is inpeciable. That and it reminds me of a story I am writing called "The Doll Room" you have such voice and and nice play on word that cannot be described by anyone! Good luck in your many other stories and I know you will become a published author when the right time comes!
-Waterbaby13
seymour2000 hearted this
great story
Hey Freak, I was wondering that, if you weren't working on any storybirds right now, if you wanted to right a storybird with me? You are one of my best friends and I thought it would be fun to work together to make THE BEST STORYBIRD OF ALL TIME!!!!!!!!! Tell me what you think of my idea by commenting on my storybird Stuff Happens. I'll be waiting!
Love, Shelby (a.k.a. sjspain)
P.S.
What is your first name?
that was cool!!! my all time favorite!!!!!!!!