The Short but Sad Tale of a Girl Named Bella Luna
The Story of a girl in love with the ocean
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Published: Aug. 11, 2010
Updated: Nov. 22, 2011
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loved it
HiddenEloise hearted this
Sweet story
kadomada hearted this
Beautiful. Simply beautiful.
polgar hearted this
Well done. Eerie and pretty at the same time.
COOL
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bellzy98 hearted this
Sweet! :)
This is a great book. When I read it, chills ran dow my spine!
~Kitty
That story was soo good...
I just dont know how to explain how I felt when I read it!
agarcia04 hearted this
Absoulutly beautiful.
ok other peoples i no this is gonna sound mean but i didnt find it all that great i mean it was ok i guess if you like stories like that but i liked your poem book WAY better! sorry. your a good writer though and you should keep at it.
bigbeak hearted this
this was good. i liked your poems better, but this was good.
KishaLynnBieber hearted this
sad but it got my attention.
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luv the story
I think that story was great
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jarjarboy2 hearted this
That's lovely and as you you said, sad. Great work!
Very cute. Correction, though. Just a bit of Constructive Criticism. "All that she needed to". Thanks for this great story.
anizmajid hearted this
Awesome book philomath I hope that your other books are as good as this one!!!!
Very entertaining. I enjoyed your writing style.
CleverCharacters hearted this
beautiful and wonderful story make more please :)
good book
we need to say that i love the the story but needs more ending
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Dear Philomath,
This is the best Storybird® that I have ever read. I sort of agree with justineleazarmeager, though. Other than that, it's PERFECT!
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swwwwwwwwwwet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wow that was really cute but sad
sweetness310 hearted this
Wow! I love this, it's amazing! Please tell me how old you are!
SarahV hearted this
so eerie. but good at the same time!
-GO SAINTS!!!
a very deep story
Ocean_Sky hearted this
zoeygrace95 hearted this
This is so wonderful! it's very eerie and eloquently written.
Junebug hearted this
This story was very touchy. It showed alot of sad thoughts within a young child. The story is a good weel develpoed story.
Too answer ho wold I am, I am 15! And thanks for the comments everyone!
LivieBear hearted this
Great short story!
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&hearts
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Sweetapple hearted this
This is kinda scary. She commited suicide
hearted this so much
I think that this one is the best one because you worded it amazing and you choose the right word for it. I( just love it so much!
easc1 hearted this
wow we though that was cool!
TayTayK02 hearted this
This was an amazing story. You are a very gifted writer. Are you an adult or a child? I look forward to reading more of your work!
modernpirate hearted this
loved the story need more stuff for scaring people let me know if u can give advice on scaring lil bros.
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swimmergal1 hearted this
wow,you're a great writer. it was sad but so good.you should be an author i would read all of your books.
awesome
Really liked this story
i liked it but why did she fall of the cliff? And she died didn't she, isn't that a bit sad to read about?
bunnii hearted this
coolgirl10 hearted this
Sad, but cool story
Cbear hearted this
you are a great writer doing everything! Funny to serious.
That was a wonderful story!
RolieOlie hearted this
its a good book. i liked it
WOW.
Really good
ralstonhomeschool hearted this
*sob*
SADBUT GOOD WELL DONE
I'm a nine year old and now i have a compaticion
lean23789 hearted this
such a good book should be published for real!
Cathryn82 hearted this
Enchanting! Really lovely story - thank you.
Bkeopraseuth hearted this
great story! i love the way u write! and also, be sure to check out my storybirds and sunshine999's storybirds and squeakable's too!
i love it incredible
Nice
321read123 hearted this
Philomath try reading a book i rote called Me and Roxy
daxter256 hearted this
mgrforever hearted this
your is great
briget2010 hearted this
Oh, poor bella luna!
nice story
mehana808 hearted this
That was an interesting story. You should definitely be a writer when you grow up.
EgyptianGoddess hearted this
Oh wow that's one good story!
Limyta hearted this
nice story cool
one word: WOW
this is so sad, dont read it if you dont wanna cry
brianah hearted this
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MyYon19 hearted this
WOW! what a story. GREAT
cleo123 hearted this
i feel sorry for the girl.
menonem hearted this
i heated this and you inspired me to make a story kinda like yours i made one called A little girls imagination
hearted this lol sorry typo
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zilliana1 hearted this
Very good
awesome!
Hamsf hearted this
estrella16 hearted this
I LOVE this story. Very good.
Hey philomath,great story I loved it personelly into a real book and could you check out another story of mine its called Monster Apocalpse
good storrryyyyy. I love it!
AWSOME!
amazing. completely...incredible. well done!
julesl2 hearted this
This book rocks! No wonder it's in the Most Popular!
pretzelwetzel hearted this
Extremely awesome!!! It's like a happy ghost story!
DivaBean325 hearted this
This was so beautiful that it made me cry the first time I read it. I love Bella Luna.
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smdpns hearted this
this si so awesome it enspired my story
THE STORY OF MARIA
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This is the best storybird I have ever read. This is the kind of story that I love. Short, sad, bittersweet.
I had to come back again. Beautiful story.
Philomath, you are my favorite Storybird writer. I tell everyone who knows about the site to read your stories. And this one is the best.
Amazing, again. Wow.
It's so saddish-happy...
lioness2 hearted this
and it touches your soul...
This is the best story i have ever heard i am litteraly crying right now....
stevensclass hearted this
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This story is the best story i've ever read on storybird! Keep it up philomath
figment68 hearted this
Great story!
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In one of the comments up there, you said you were 15. That was 10 months ago, so I'm assuming you're still around that age. But while I read that, I was sure you were an adult. That was just a beautiful, eerie story. You have a real knack for writing. That was fantastic.
read it please
Eerie but amazing. You're a wonderful author. Keep it up.
~waphooy
waphooy hearted this
celtic32 hearted this
Wow!! That was amazing, and beatiful. Yet, eerie, and almost, well, haunting, in a good way. Bravo!
Cassb hearted this
Fabulous story!! Well done!! ☺
birthdays hearted this
Allalea hearted this
So very sad, but thought provoking as well. Great job!
erench hearted this
very nice.
this is sad especially at the end. i don't want to spoil it but she has a dream come true but on the way she died.
dmohr hearted this
I used the same artist to create a sad story as well. I like what you did with yours. There is a haunting quality that pulls us in. Good job!
That is a sad story.
CarsonMoreland hearted this
redruby550 hearted this
wow that was amazing you should make more
ITS LONG BUT COOL!!!
Rainbow741 hearted this
Great job! I love it! But it was so sad. Once again, great job!
BRAVO! I loved it!
Possum99 hearted this
Love it!!! So sad - it nearly made me cry, but I am glad that she was happy and she could be in the ocean where she wanted to be!!! Amazing story!!!
really good
zarour1 hearted this
AmeliaC357 hearted this
I love this, it is so, well, nice, pleasent, i hope you write more!!!!!!!!!
SophieQT hearted this
Beautiful! One of my FAVE AUTHORS, LOVED YOUR STORY.!!
grace2003 hearted this
Awesome! And it is sad.
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4100 hearted this
the story was wounderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
VaishnaviS hearted this
OMG that rocked
I love it!!!!
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Sasuke21 hearted this
Great story philomath!!!!!
KH17618 hearted this
:)
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Wow. I'm at a loss for words. This book... Is AMAZING!!! I never thought that a story so sad could be so happy at the same time! It is truly an honor to be somewhat in your presence.
VanillaBookworm hearted this
Beautiful! I love how sad but happy it is!
oliviaks1 hearted this
It's an Ok book.
EmileeA hearted this
Tori11 hearted this
Love it!...i hope you make anouther book like it!
LOVE IT SOO MUCH!! Beautiful.
muellermob hearted this
awesome
Nele hearted this
Really goo!
Awesome!
nice story i liked it p.s:)
OH MY GOSH! That was flipping awsome!Where did you learn to do that? Can I collaborate a story with you? I'm new here, but a good writer. Once my first story will come out, I would be honored if you would be the first person to see it and comment.
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added to my list!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
you should enter this in a comp it is so good !
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kab2000 hearted this
hmmm...
luminiere hearted this
BellaLuna is a very beautiful name! I'm glad that she became happy! The ocean is a wonderful place. It was kind of sad, but I really liked it!
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hines419 hearted this
AWW! Its so sad but its so awesome!
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What a sad story even if it is short*************************!
Bridie3D hearted this
cool
Did bella luna die
truly heartbraeking
loveit
EBishop hearted this
that is sssooo sad but it is sssooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Breannalovesallthepeople hearted this
Sad
0161038 hearted this
thats a sad story
s9321100 hearted this
WOW THAT WAS GREAT
Aww how sad.It is still very sweet.
that was beautiful
wow so interesting
Puggie2 hearted this
Bencyber hearted this
This is a great Story Bird! Great Job!
Noly_Bahdd hearted this
it was a good story
orcagurl8 hearted this
like this
love it!
nice......
I like this alot!
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Nice.. :)
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<3
wow thats alot of comments but it is so good !
syy hearted this
that was kinda scary! But it was heart touching.
saalim hearted this
OMG! this story was awesome and it also got my attention and touched my heart
harbins19 hearted this
wonderful
it simply grabbed my heart
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The only thing I can say is...
WOW.
I ABSOLUTELY WILL ADD THIS TO MY READING LIST, I WILL HEART IT, I WILL LEAVE THIS COMMENT AND I WILL POST A STORY RESPONSE! XOXOXOX - FOR THE STORY!
fluffybug hearted this
Good job philomath! Great story.
iloveyour story<3(:
pepexmas hearted this
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JaclynPhua hearted this
really reallly good but who did u think of all that stuff
amccord2 hearted this
sarahChan hearted this
awsome
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Rhionnad2 hearted this
Scary
COOL
really good and great story, although a few spelling/grammar mistakes here and there
My goodness this is a wonderful sad story i can relate though,sometimes i feel as if i don't get to do anything but to others they feel like i get to do way more things
2L7 hearted this
this is a great story!!!!! your great at writing!
um...it was ok i liked your poems better but the story was ok.
<3 this story it has that something in it that makes the story fanastic <3
Did Bella Luna die??
Charlib hearted this
omg that was so cool. but did she want to fall in? and did that mean she died? and when people say they saw her was that her ghost? any way, awesome story :P
PBF99 hearted this
jessesung hearted this
GOOOOOOOOD
its beautiful, write one about Kid Cudi
very sad but creative. i liked it
eisaman hearted this
smandin hearted this
Wonderfully done. Amazingly detailed description.Love it.
cpysczynski hearted this
AMAZING!!!
emily200212 hearted this
Sapphirepb hearted this
This book is great. U DID WONDERFUL
That story was very sad but I loved it
RaymanK67 hearted this
cool
Excellent story philomath!
Momoko hearted this
Your story moved me,beautiful...sad
tuatarah hearted this
Jazmin3 hearted this
nice i loved it but it seeme like you coppied it out of a book
Love it i want to be just like you your book is just as you said sad but short my middle name is bella and i have black hair
Moshigirl123 hearted this
do you like my cat spazi its known for short as sabation (:
the worlds best story is about a girl named bella luna i feel it is such a beautiful story i love it i fell in love with it you should be proud of yourself keep up the good storys
Good story and a lot of details
ansmi hearted this
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TessSkailette hearted this
cute but really sad I love how you said she was happy at the end
ps feel free to cheack out my stories
cool
SBacher hearted this
duck23 hearted this
this is a awsome story
Beautifully made.
VintageH96 hearted this
i can't believe you made that up
I loved that story!!!!!!! did she die? This story was so amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lovekitty hearted this
flutegrrl hearted this
BEAUTIFUL VERY SAD THOUGH
I hope you can write more. How can you feel these sad moments but still put happiness in them?
that is a great BOOK!!
missyi501 hearted this
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katlyn10 hearted this
gorgeous
keeganparker hearted this
i just loved your story like you sad it was sad and it was soooooooooooooooooo awesome
Destinystar123 hearted this
good book
I really liked the story! Kinda sad :( but goooood
star_writer22 hearted this
Jassy555 hearted this
THIS A SUCH A GREAT BOOK
erin10800 hearted this
sceaca hearted this
it was well good
michelina123 hearted this
Amazing.
OMG!!! You should so write more! Love It!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
That was beautiful, sad, and poetic. Brilliant.
Best Book Ever!!!!!!!!!
KITTY616 hearted this
very rad dude!
I love it
LilyP17 hearted this
smiles10101 hearted this
One word for you.... great! Loved it. Well done! Well done! I can see why you get so many views!
emmatherubberduck hearted this
This is so sad and so beautiful...
shirley6116 hearted this
franhanimo hearted this
loved it
biebs hearted this
Oh I say that was rather good
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I loved it!
DG5 hearted this
sooo good
awwwww how sad
Caitie01 hearted this
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hearted this
i thin you are pettry good at making stor i also think you sould writ books because you are so good
candy6622 hearted this
good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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ED9 hearted this
AWESOME!I LOVE IT.
AngelusM hearted this
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magyk hearted this
karias hearted this
very good story
Deep and Sad
do i need tissues?
UGE14 hearted this
it so sad
: (
lfk1a hearted this
stellybelly hearted this
wow
this story is cool awsome
It made me cry. You are an inspiration. Keep on writing!
i like it sooo much
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dtwilight hearted this
Beatiful! I haven't swam in the ocean in ages! Wish I could swim there again.
Nneka hearted this
I like it, but it is sad.
wierd but true
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awesomeEmme hearted this
i really like this book it is one of my favorites from nziolkoski
nziolkoski hearted this
this story rocks alot of the other storys on here are to short
sofoma hearted this
hearted it
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chelsea119 hearted this
That was a good story, I like how it it ended with bella luna being happy. Overall it was a good story.
wow that was beautiful, but tragic
Ethan_Palmer hearted this
Jake_Palmer hearted this
*SOB* wonderful story :)
OMG
such a good story!!!!!!!!!!!
conwaycl hearted this
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gabyplaystheflute hearted this
I really like this story I just don't like the drawing you chosen for it they could have been more realistic and she looks kinda scary but other than that I love it this is the best story on storybird and it really grabbed attention
i loved this story although it was sad it was soooo good! now im gonna read some more of your storys i bet there just as good or better and i luved ur details.
Madalyn_Palmer hearted this
Cool but touchy
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Good adjictives!
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To Be Honest, This Book Was Pretty Good... Although, It Isn't Exactly My Style... But, It's Still A Good Book. :D <3
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jaybee1320 hearted this
That is such a good story, but its so sad. It juast teaches people to not be that way.
bridget124301999 hearted this
Emmsa hearted this
Your story is beautiful, inspirational <3
madison_clark hearted this
DS19 hearted this
cooooooooool and scary
rockstr2321 hearted this
VERY depresing but good never the less
Sheridan8 hearted this
imogg hearted this
Ive read this book so many times, i love it. One of the best books ive ever read!
It was really good and sad.
nice and sad
Grace_Palmer hearted this
dinotopian hearted this
It was a nice story that brings up many lessons that is necessary in our lives. I loved it.
Awesome story! I felt like I was right there with her, watching her life unfold.
this is beautiful i wish i could heart but i forgot how
its ok i like it tho
MelonGanache hearted this
That story really moved me, and I really felt like I was in her life!
LSensei hearted this
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i almost cried because its so sad! the part when she let her self fall and the part when people say that it looks like she became part of the ocean! (cries and rolls on the floor) WHY! WHY! (continuce rolling on the floor crying)
i love it!
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This book made me cry I loved this book so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love it!
Acting hearted this
TeamAdamLevine hearted this
This story was VERY good. It is pretty eerie but it was such a great story I don't even know how to put it in words! p.s. Bella Luna is a VERY pretty name!!!
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Minasia hearted this
There is so much emotion in this story. If you wrote this book for real, it would be published and win a prize. If I worked for book publishers, you would have many prizes. I know a good auther when I hear a story like this.
Thewolf hearted this
Fida hearted this
I loved it! That was a great story!
PenguinLover82 hearted this
Philomath what an amazing story
yellowgreen32 hearted this
Rkitten5 hearted this
loved it
This is so sad. But a really good story.
ZMonkey16 hearted this
nuradilahroslee hearted this
That is so sad
annemaria1000 hearted this
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Phenin hearted this
Ganesha hearted this
that was so good!!!
andi9 hearted this
This is a cool story!
MmeDanceDrama hearted this
BURR!!!
Very good, but sad. :)
DaHopps hearted this
that was a good story
emhopeeckels hearted this
saphire1999 hearted this
love it! made my heart smile
liveandlove2 hearted this
That is sad... but sweet. It's good.
amazing simply amazing
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ltruong hearted this
realy good book good luck
eholland hearted this
beautifully sad
Taliyah18 hearted this
Hogwarts18 hearted this
very touching story
desyrayee hearted this
i loved this so much
haerted it
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hearted this
kristpadd hearted this
I loved this sooo munch. U r a good author
very clever!
its funny how the parents r afraid she will fall into the ocean!
can u read my storybird?
1snowwhite hearted this
I love it!
muwahhh the best story i have read in a longgggg while
where do u get ur beatiful ideas from and ur use of language is just like a real author
HirsLio hearted this
:)
I LOVE IT
THE BOOK IS SO FUN
wow! that was the best story ever! kool.
i love it when the red water commes out <3
OreoKid hearted this
I did not understand the end but other way i liked it :)
fergusonm hearted this
awesome!!!
bertotc hearted this
that was inspireing
Love It!!!
C92 hearted this
Used the same artist for my story!!
AwesomeWriter hearted this
Wow! So many commentS! And no wonder! This is an amazing story!! Now go read mine! AwesomeWriter
juliana10 hearted this
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Teachermom hearted this
GOOD STORY
pinkie1533 hearted this
great story who ever you are
i love your stroy
Vasco hearted this
kind of sad but good!
Sofea hearted this
cool
wow cool story
salaina hearted this
angelsoul14 hearted this
OMG! That was so cool! I totally loved it!
That is such a good book!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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alexamdb hearted this
Written very well!!!!!!!!
AnNguyen hearted this
Lovely story. Nicely written.
Good job. Should be proud.
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAW!:"C
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madisonmrsd hearted this
Thats sad but good..... very good
That was the best short story I have ever read!!!!
cool story
OMG!!!!! Loved it!!!
then again II have loved ALL your stories!!!! They make up a large part of my reading list!!!!
please check out my books???
thanks!!!
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Lynnwd28 hearted this
I like your story it is very nice of you to write this story!
fudgie hearted this
beautiful story
JanaE1 hearted this
deepfried_freak hearted this
COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Leahsts hearted this
nayroxs850 hearted this
it is so cute
THIS BOOK IS QWITE SAD
i loved it simply wonderful i've stood where bella stood i can hear her.
ALMJ hearted this
xbox3000 hearted this
Great story!
This is amazing! Truly heart touching. I almost cried! I know how you feel. I always want to go to the beach and be in the ocean but we can't. We don't live anywhere near the ocean. We visit every Summer though. I am and always will feel like I'm apart of the ocean. I am from the ocean. I was born next to the ocean. Heart touching. Amazing! Make more about the ocean please!
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This is a very sad story, it makes me want to cry!
I love this. How do you heart? If I knew how to I would heart this Storybird million times! Amazing.
MacyMartin hearted this
such a sad but sweet story i want the name Bella Luna
It so sad sniff sniff...
Basilcat123 hearted this
teg202 says: :) it's awesome
Wow how good.
That was really cool!
Haiming hearted this
good story
poetatheart hearted this
wow this book has more hearts than comments!
mssmith454 hearted this
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brwil hearted this
It was really good!
sammy2345 hearted this
I love it but it is very sad. Nice story, you are an awesome writer
lttt hearted this
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Weegirl hearted this
it s good
IT WAS ALIT SAD
IT WAS ALIT SAD
IT WAS ALIT SAD
wow!!!
scary!!
thaat felt heart stopping!!
lizziedoll10 hearted this
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jeabc hearted this
Good story
i thought it was really good and i'm 9
CherryBlossom714 hearted this
awesome, touching
Crystal98 hearted this
wow thats an amazing drawing i love it
its probly gonna creep my sister out cause her name is Bella
lol
It's good, great description, great vocab, but, it might be just me, but, i dont understand why anyone would commit suciside because they couldn't see the ocean, I'll read it again. Otherwise, it's GREAT!
I'm 9 and I loooooooooved it(:
That is kind of sad. :( And it is really touching. But it could use a sequel. Something like 'Bella Luna Returns' or something like that, just a thought.
very nice
sad but lovely
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i love thisss!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sad
snowdrop9292 hearted this
wow, what a wonderful story!
that was brilliant
:)
lilliendahlr908 hearted this
You are a great writer
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elvarocks98 hearted this
I love it! :-)Touching!
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ToriJoelle hearted this
This is an amazing and heartfelt story! I would read this any day! Keep writing!
I loved your story it is so good
CharlotteK12 hearted this
There is a girl in Harry Potter called Luna...
nesiakw hearted this
how long did it take you to write this . its real wow wow wow eaven though its sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad
p.s im new looking for friends
wow that is cool story i love it
Jorja07 hearted this
amazing story.this is going on my reading list.
readingizawesome hearted this
eet hearted this
Well developed story!!!
Wow, that was creepy at the end, but, really great!
cradduckl332 hearted this
hearted this
Ally85205 hearted this
I love this book it is so good
i love this storybird
soulsurfer12 hearted this
WOW HEart Felt and touching!!!
Stargazer23 hearted this
very nice story i like it
Nated hearted this
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micaelarocks hearted this
love it
such a sad story
shizas hearted this
harted this
wow love it!!!!!
doctorwho8 hearted this
micaelaayli hearted this
this story was awesome
It was really sad that she felled in the water and died it reaped my heart out
its alright
:p
BiancaGrondin hearted this
love it!!!
It is awesome you got some skills!!!!
wow weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
shuber hearted this
So sad!
angelic247 hearted this
hearted this wonderful story
08JoannaP hearted this
it was scary!!!
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mberghahn hearted this
wow.
puddles hearted this
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Hannahksps hearted this
liked that story it was really good but sad
That was a beautiful story well done!!!
tom5 hearted this
Jellebean100 hearted this
So sad but sweet
spanishjas hearted this
that was sooooo great! really sad but great!
windsofchange hearted this
Ilove it VERY much :D awesome story!!!
iAussie hearted this
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Mistlugia hearted this
Hey this is a great story it made me nearly cry! I feel sorry 4 Bella Luna's parents who lost her. But at least Bella Luna was happy in the end.
Spyrol123 hearted this
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trinitye115 hearted this
wow i love this how old r u
Lauranorton hearted this
reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeelly cool
Completely amazing and beautiful at the same time. Totally touches the heart and captures the mind!
I din't really get the whole point of the story. It kinda creeped me out.
Vanderi hearted this
jbieberlover hearted this
i loved it, simply brilliant and divine. Sad but in-between-the-line happy at the end. Simply delicious.
haf2000 hearted this
This story is great but very creepy, I cant wait till your next book :)
chattycathy hearted this
This is funny.
I THOUGHT THAT ITS A REALLY GOOD STORYBIRD. HAVE YOU WRITTEN ANYMORE? IF YOU HAVE TAKE A LOOK AT MINE, THE BEST IS CALLED THE LONELY GIRL. AGAIN YOUR STORY IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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AKfour hearted this
OK
That was sooooooo good!!
lexiscool2244 hearted this
I love it!
Hello!
ariannac hearted this
That was a wonderful story
arg0001 hearted this
OMG! that is a beautiful story! Absolutely luv it!
-Jazzy :)
jzanders hearted this
great
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kiha hearted this
i like this story but is to sad
ctobler20 hearted this
I loved that book! It was sad but also happy because Bella Luna got her dream
I loved your book it almost made me cry.
familyfirst28 hearted this
Loved your story!!!
sherbertgirl123 hearted this
it is so sad i love this book
what a sad but great story
hearted this
i like your story it is cool
WillowDusk hearted this
Cool!! and sorta creepy...please check out my books everyone!!!
livie9 hearted this
cool
cool
SAD but very very very GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!
fishyhae3203 hearted this
schao hearted this
devonrose hearted this
the best story eva!
it makes me cry!
xx
RMM123123 hearted this
zyonp1 hearted this
That is so sad but happy goooooooooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddd jooooooooooooooooooooooooooooobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
mbylah352 hearted this
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puppypals1 hearted this
Loved it
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sealpup1 hearted this
i loved this. but it was so sad. why did she have to dye
standsd hearted this
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yvett hearted this
that is sad but a good story!
AbbieSTS hearted this
Great story!(:
tink12 hearted this
Sad but that is the best book ever.
daniels115 hearted this
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lucy19 hearted this
Awesome i really liked this book! :D
EPIC sad story! I loved it! Even though it was sad, I loved how there was a sorta happy ending. I love writing sad stories myself! Good on u! :)
Melody133 hearted this
Oh so sad loved it absouletly loved it:)
ej210go hearted this
loved it!
cookies16 hearted this
EF628 hearted this
It is a very emotional story, it captures you in its arms.
LaVa000903 hearted this
cool dude
AWSOME STORY
GREAT STORY!!!!!!
smw11799 hearted this
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poppi299 hearted this
I loved your story. it was brilliant. well done
your story is amazing and shot and good
abigails4s hearted this
*shudder* That's creepy. But very well written. With a bitter-sweet ending.
NiceStorn71 hearted this
VERY SAD BUT STILL VERY SWEET I LOVED IT LITERALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sgiesbrecht hearted this
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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atb hearted this
VEERRYY SAD!
:(
WOW! THIS IS AMAZING! I LOVED IT! THERE ARE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE IT! IT'S JUST SO GOOD!
Now i have read it again!!! Like 5 times i have that!! Would be relly happy if you read my storybirds!!!♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
thats so wered but aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeee
isabellepwe hearted this
very nice love the details
love it!!
ataylor19 hearted this
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Peppe5434 hearted this
your a great writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!
panditangela hearted this
Simple. Beautiful. Amazing. This is one of my favorite storybirds of all time.
You are an awesome writer!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that is sad very good description
aleej hearted this
nora8885665 hearted this
Prays have been sent to Bella Luna.
:)
pixiepixel299 hearted this
I like this story! At first I thought she was dead! But no she isn't.
lOVE IT
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agd143 hearted this
great story ! it is one of my favorites .
shinymew hearted this
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nd23 hearted this
Wow i really love this story!!!It's sad and happy at the same time!!!!!Keep making more books like this!!!
hdowli hearted this
great story awsome story
melodie432 hearted this
Charlotte2402 hearted this
this is sick awesome! GR8!
ESC2011 hearted this
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ellefv hearted this
SAD!
hollylolly28 hearted this
Camila10yoc hearted this
OH....MY....GOSH! I LOVE THIS! HOW COME I CAN'T HEART IT AGAIN?!?!
LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!
I Luv this! Its so beautiful and sad and mysterious! Omg I love it!
great
abenson hearted this
Gentle hearted this
GREAT JOB!
So, I read it again. God, I love this story. I just have to come back, because it's completely amazing. Fantastic job.
Bear23 hearted this
I loved this story it was so wonderful. Bella Luna is a beautiful name it reminds me of Twilight. I hope to read more of your books. Peace Love Tulips.
good story,you should sell it,lol:)
i agree with shayb772!!!
you should
That was ok
ApoorvaR9 hearted this
loved it!!!!!!
KITTYPENGUIN hearted this
I LOVED IT!! even though im pretty young it touched my heart! <3
Also plz check out my storys u might like them =D
It was well written. There were lots of motion. it really touched my heart.
mansoor332 hearted this
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flowerpuff97 hearted this
creepy but good (the pictures are creepy)
the story is sad and happy
GracieEllaGirl hearted this
I love this story
almonsca000 hearted this
PierreO4 hearted this
Two words...YOU ROCK!!!
By the way,don't ask why my username is turtle44 and..I LOVE POKEMON!!
courtneyt10 hearted this
It's so sad how could you write it.
I'am about to read this so i hope it will be good
This the best story well done it is fabulouse well done again.Read my story it is called the winter wood by hollygull
hollygull hearted this
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Jipan hearted this
I loved it!!!! Such a beautiful and touching story. Simply amazing!!!! ")
mba1112 hearted this
good book love it
meandyou30 hearted this
I loved it!!!Big fan of this story...And fan of your story birds!!!!!!!!!
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arector hearted this
Very good
Very good
kara25 hearted this
student4 hearted this
this is a really sad story but it was a great read
JMW1 hearted this
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morgan3606 hearted this
Wow, quite a neat little fairytale. It reminds me a little of my own book:
(oh it wouln't let me post aresponse, but my book Possibility is like this)
OMG IDK Y BUT UR MY FAVORITE AUTHOR ON STORY BIRD I READ ALL UR STORIES. READ MINE
OMG this is sad and beutiful at the same time. i love it
DreamsphereINC hearted this
ashcraftz hearted this
i think The New York Times should come and publish this ;)
ohh very nice story!
espositoem hearted this
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willywonka745 hearted this
wow thats a good story
Lovely story really eerie too!! love it!
lioness22 hearted this
sweetpea23 hearted this
It's so good but so sad at the same time! Really good job!
eclouse hearted this
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vtsukhai hearted this
Great story. I would of not thought to a person read write a sad story. Im not a kind of perso who likes to read sad stories but i liked this sad story.
statefarm hearted this
i love your description its on my reading list
SHSgirl101 hearted this
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alex48257 hearted this
lizzy10163 hearted this
I love this.
Poon6 hearted this
The story was so good that I heart it and add it into my reading list just when I finish reading it!
FeatheredDragon hearted this
Touching,i must say
This is an amazing storybird simply the best story I have read so far
bennyjulie hearted this
Brenana97 hearted this
Sweet story.bit mysterious too.
PinkiePie hearted this
THAT STORY IS GREAT
milamcw hearted this
so cute :]
That was actually happy it was not sad. Well it was for her parents.
I think that it was sad in some parts but it was cute/ not by Bekacooper its by wannya
lincoln11 hearted this
Don't stop writing this book is pure talent! Follow your dreams and don't give up. The first book you publish I will read!
very sad indeed ;(
hope you like my story!
i love this story it's so sad though.
roxytheawsome hearted this
aboestc hearted this
This story is sad. But it is really good
I almost cried after I read this
Princess202 hearted this
great now I'm supposed to find more room in my reading list loved it!!!!
Wow that was a beautiful, enchanting story!!! brings tears to my eyes
NourahM hearted this
cute
I LOVE YOUR BOOK
poper2202 hearted this
Cool
sad but good
tessia16 hearted this
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Vegetagirl hearted this
this was very sad but this was also a fantastic story
like it but it is sad
i love this story it is sad and wonderful at the same time. it was layed out perfectly. well done.it was great.
I'm speechless.
morganbird hearted this
this was sad but
lovely
THAT WAS SO HEARTED THIS
afiorentinostc hearted this
sammysam08 hearted this
i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is amazing and I love it!!
nabbynab19 hearted this
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angiedogs hearted this
its a great story but its really sad
lmacdonald hearted this
Nice story
This story must be published.Amazing!
mangagirl1216 hearted this
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gtisabella hearted this
your right it is very sad but i loved it philomath
edmgirl99 hearted this
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227md hearted this
I think you did great
kgreen1 hearted this
it is short but sad
KJT_ hearted this
That was really awesome! I need to show this to my friends!
It's a good story.
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shazen21 hearted this
This is an awesome book of dreams and happy-ness
shoppingcarthero hearted this
penny34 hearted this
I heart all the detail!I almost cried!
NICE
laney68 hearted this
So amazing! Just heartbreaking!
Bella1112 hearted this
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12181 hearted this
Very good! It's so well writen. I love it! FIVE STARS!
WOW!It kind of creeped me out when she fell in,that was also my
favorite part.When it ended,I was like,more more of the story more!That is one of my favorite storybirds.You should be famous.You must like the moon!:) :) :) :) :)!!!!
melissam10 hearted this
Kaili3 hearted this
This was amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Moonfiree hearted this
This stroy is A-M-A-Z-I-N-G !!! enjoyed reading this ^ :)
good good story just amazing
i liked your story
smeylie hearted this
amazing story!!!!!
atidum hearted this
CherryBlossom15 hearted this
Interesting story where did you get your inspiration?
omg this story is soo sad and sooo sewat i L.O.V.E it i almosed cryed but it is so nice that she is fialy happy ;-) once again L.O.V.E it
Andrew1eh hearted this
cooooool
lahopkins hearted this
SoraPatton hearted this
Sad... :( But beautiful!
This a wierd and sad at the same time, If I were her parents I would cry day and night
Mariamzz hearted this
Bjarne5454 hearted this
i cried so hard at the ending!!!!!!!!!!!!
......so.....beutiful
meowhikitties hearted this
I don't get it. How is that sad?
best story ever
sjones8 hearted this
good story
awesome story you rocked the world and you propply won't raed this because it's all the way at the bottem and agin awesome story <3
Claire12143 hearted this
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nbtsb hearted this
omg this story made me cry and sob 4 at least 20 mins who ever u are great job on the story
BaiEns324 hearted this
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NataliaX hearted this
it was so great i think you should keep going with books oh and im nine
yeehaastallions hearted this
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Etime2 hearted this
That was scary but nice
wow. that story is really touching.
cocoBailey hearted this
great story the girls parents were very very mean!!
:( good story anyway
Clober0987 hearted this
Best Story That I Have Read Yet! Keep It Upp Gurll You Have Good Skills Use Em' Wisely! pretty awsome book gurll. Thats A Clap For U !!! :)
sierrahxdy12467 hearted this
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ILOVEKITTLES7 hearted this
This was an amazing story it was so sad but at least the girl got what she want
005994 hearted this
zoroarksstorys1 hearted this
LOVE IT!
-zoroarkstorys1
i love this story. it is very heartfelt.
cupcakeparty7945 hearted this
I love your story. It is nice. It is good story.
Cherri28 hearted this
This is awesome;) Good job!!!!!! youdid grrrrreat!
shaig09 hearted this
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nsaisaraidves hearted this
a truthfully great book. please read my stories sometime
It's a beautiful story...!
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ihskaas hearted this
Great story. I am going to tell my friends about this
ghollowayM03 hearted this
trinityjulia hearted this
did the girl die? i loved your story:)
trinityalexis hearted this
can you read one of my storys one is called secrect cave
sweetie8 hearted this
sad :( but a least she gets to be what she wanted to be:)
LaurenGirl hearted this
That is sooo sad
wow that was heavy but at the same time great
RaveenaSidhu hearted this
2007gabbie hearted this
That is a really cool story and i love the end so much <3
Thats such a sad story but great work on the story
20meidson hearted this
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LGetz3 hearted this
amazing adding to my story list
beautifully written.
norinordstrom288 hearted this
I love it!!! It reminds me of my book called "'Once a friend always a friend"
I am so excited to read your other books!!! You should be a writer? What am I saying you already are a lovely, beautiful awesome writer!!!
enave hearted this
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
mango0977 hearted this
omg awesome story
goldencurl42 hearted this
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DaniCalifornia1999 hearted this
this is a great story i enjoyed it.
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mynah hearted this
AAAWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE!!!!!!
mimiubug hearted this
norwaybound658 hearted this
UNBELIEVABLY GOOD!!!!!
OMG! So good!
Fairoozn hearted this
So Good
I wish that I could see her
Vidza hearted this
A short, bittersweet story.
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laurenpalma hearted this
This story is so amazing, I wish I could see her.