The Story Teller

Comments (9)

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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 2
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 2
  
  Grade: 89
  Something needs to be added to the last page that will make it clear that the story addresses the question "Is it better not to know?" Also, pages 4 and 7 have some obvious mistakes with spelling, grammar, or punctuation.

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  supercoolkid93 says:
  ohhhhh darnn!!!!
  

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  supercoolkid93 says:
  WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  mikefisher821 says:
  I predict that you are going to be a funny adult one day. Does Mr. Mikulski appreciate your humor? Funny story! -Mike Fisher

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaye says:
  You okay over there supercoolkid?

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  rlobaugh says:
  (A couple of typos on page 9.) Prickles is a mean little pickle! I guess what took me off of the path to knowing the underlying message was the part where Prickles was LYING about the things he was telling people, but somehow he got it right that the carrot would be held hostage??? Seems like you liked the picture and wanted to make it fit...I'll be watching for the revised version!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  supercoolkid93 says:
  mike- mr mikulski enjoys my humor. him amongst many others actually enjoy my humor. i guess i am a very funny kid. i take after my dad. i want to be just like him (dont tell my mom) haha. thanks for the comment and keep them coming!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  Jabd says:
  This is fantastic!

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  monk51295 says:
  My favorite book cover. I love that monster. Very clever with the prediction for Noodles. Catchy names as well. :)

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)

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