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joew Mr. Blayney,I really enjoyed your story. From, Joey (joeyw)
storygirl9 I loooooovvvveeeeeddddd your story and so did my sister. I showed it to my mom and we all loved it!!! Good job Mr. Blayney!!!
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rec5 its a really good story!!!
Raven1234 U did a great job!
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clairewalker Good. Your apostrophe is in the wrong place on page nine and you are missing a word on page six. I do like the story, though. very creative
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Raven1234 A really great storybird! 2 thumbs up! ;)
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CMSJordanT I loved this story. It had a perfect flow. Great Job!
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joew Mr. Blayney,
I really enjoyed your story.
From, Joey (joeyw)
storygirl9 I loooooovvvveeeeeddddd your story and so did my sister. I showed it to my mom and we all loved it!!! Good job Mr. Blayney!!!
kazosamoore Hearted.
figment68 Hearted.
hjweller Hearted.
BellaBe I LOVE it so cool and adventorus
storygirl9 Hearted.
kazosamoore SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
rec5 its a really good story!!!
Raven1234 U did a great job!
scolwell Hearted.
scolwell great job
scolwell i wish i could buy it
mjc02 Hearted.
mjc02 AWESOME!!!!!!!!
clairewalker Good. Your apostrophe is in the wrong place on page nine and you are missing a word on page six. I do like the story, though. very creative
marrushl awesome
sbickell Love IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111$$$%^^^&&&*((**&^%
norinordstrom288 awesome job!!!! :0)
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bunnu2000 THE BEST STORYBIRD EVER
ecca Hearted.
Raven1234 A really great storybird! 2 thumbs up! ;)
emerha that was the best storybird i have eva read!!!! you should really win that comp!
PenguinGirl123 Hearted.
redsoxrule awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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CMSJordanT I loved this story. It had a perfect flow. Great Job!