The Tower

Author:

jmk

Illustrator:

Irisz Agocs

Age Group:

1-3 years

jmikulski says:
Meaning - 4
Development - 4
Illustrations - 4
Mechanics - 4

Grade - 98
Just a few minor errors with word choice and fluency. Overall, excellent story!
Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
orchfan says:
This is great! I like that it is so concise. The concept is very good too (the mouse wishing to be an elephant). Very true to the theme your teacher assigned!
Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
mikefisher821 says:
I like that his attitude didn't change when his perspective changed. Very true of real life. Great job! -Mike Fisher
Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
kaye says:
I like the theme as well, but was a bit surprised that what the elephant saw was the same as what the mouse saw!
Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
rlobaugh says:
That poor little mouse! After all of that work gathering and stacking, he must have been exhausted! Too bad he found the "new" view disappointing. I enjoyed that you were able to get the message across in an easy-to-follow storyline, but I was also surprised that he didn't see things differently once he climbed on top of the elephant. Interesting and unexpected twist!
Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
monk51295 says:
makes me happy to be me. does it make you happy to be you? you - great writer of stories... :)
Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)