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The Train

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The Train
When Zach falls in love with an exchange student the question is will they ever see each other again when Maria goes back to Mexico?
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  • smiley316
    smiley316 says:
    That is jsut the most touching story that I have ever read! I mean, wow! You were so descriptive, and had tons of details, words like 'humid' really helped me picture the setting. Good job!!!!!!!!! :-) Are you working on anything more?

    -Smiley
    Posted 12 months ago (Permalink)
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  • laney68
    laney68 says:
    Thank you smiley, that is a huge honor! I have a new story out called Broken Hearts and a Star. Enjoy :D
    Posted 12 months ago (Permalink)
  • figment68
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  • figment68
    figment68 says:
    Beautiful story! I loved it.
    Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
  • leCuento
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  • emma2004
    emma2004 says:
    That is very sweet. Keep making good stories. Good Job!!

    I've never seen someone with that beautiful talent.
    Congratulations!!!!
    Posted 10 months ago (Permalink)
  • laney68
    laney68 says:
    I just wrote The Orchid, which you can find under the 'new and noted' section of storybird or just looking through my others
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
  • AshDar
    AshDar says:
    laney, I have to say that you are a GREAT author! This story is so magnificent! I wrote a love story. Can you read it?
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
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Published: May 13, 2011
Updated: May 17, 2011
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