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  ecca hearted this

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  mark says:
  Great story with a smart moral. Well done. (Love the username, too. Makes me want to change mine to "fake polystyrene man")

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  mark hearted this

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  GuruDuffy says:
  Rachel =) love it =) think theres a bit of a career there.. x

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  happyhappy says:
  I love your story!
  

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  student3 hearted this

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  sitizulaikha2001 says:
  your story is v.good!

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  earl100 says:
  cool

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  gracerutledge says:
  Great story!

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  arthurer says:
  i LOVED IT

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  sarah123 says:
  It was to long for me and I only got to page 5 so It was good at the parts I've read.

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  Vans24 says:
  I agree with Mark. Great story by the way!

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  Cymbleyn says:
  Very sweet, I love the lesson in the story!

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  roseylinda says:
  nice job

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  1566 says:
  o my gosh!!!!!!!!!! ur fist storyy gets featured!!!! that just screams of PURE TALENT!!!!!!!!!

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  lelee hearted this

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  lelee says:
  i loved it
  

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  zb9163 hearted this

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  ecrrepubublic says:
  Such a good moral and story!

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  XxJinaxX hearted this

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  Snakegirl says:
  interesting

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  happy_street hearted this

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  roachy02 says:
  I wish that I could be her and not get in trouble for running away, altho it was a very good.

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  Lillie says:
  You've got real talent! Next time, make longer and longer stories, and soon you'll make a chapter book!

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  twilightangel7 says:
  this is a great story! I love it because if u read it u kind of learn that u should think how someone else thinks! :D

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  blueflowers says:
  I think that this was one of the best stories that I have ever read! !!

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  InkySquid says:
  it is very interesting story..

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  kbrenton says:
  What a great story! It makes sense and it's very true!

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  missK hearted this

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  Nicole219 says:
  Loved it! Hearted it, like duh!

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  gum4u says:
  AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  polgar says:
  I really love how this story has a moral! Great job! Are you going to be a writer someday? I sure do hope so.

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