The URS (Part 19) A two storybirder tag game The Last part

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  • karthur 1st commenter on the last chapter of the best series EVER! Whoop Whoop!
    Awwwww...... it's over now.... :-(
    Fabulous story you guys!!! It was the best series I've EVER read on Storybird EVER!!! What a fabulous way to end Kyra's part Goldie!!! You both wrote amazing parts and endings, and I loved each and every one of them. I always got on storybird in the morning before I went to catch the bus for school, and whenever I saw a new URS part show up under Recent Stories(which was almost every day), I got really really excited and read it right away!
    The art always went wonderfully with the current story, and I loved how it went back and forth between Kyra and Jenny, so we got to see each of their takes on the situations.
    Just an idea, because I hate for it to end all so quickly, maybe you could do an after-story tag game between the two of you.
    Like, after the four split and went their own seperate ways, what happens later on in their lives? Do they meet back together again? Or maybe a story on Kyra leading the HMC in the future! I don't know. It's up to you two. Just an idea! You both have lives to live, so do as you please!
    Amazing, amazing job, and I really enjoyed reading this series and wil always be a HUGE fan of it and the both of you!!!
    - Karthur *UFF! *URS Fan Forever!*

  • karthur Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • figment68 Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • figment68 Awesome Goldie!! I love it. Thank you for inviting me to do this great tag game. It was a lot of fun. I can't wait to read about all of Kyra's adventures!! Go Kyra!

  • p14hjam Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • p14hjam Wow... great ending!

  • writer_smurf Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • writer_smurf Smurfy! Would you like to compete in rareity11's 2nd challenge?
    http://storybird.com/books/rareity11s-second-challenge/
    It would be smurf-tastic to have you to compete!

  • mightyfighty2000 Hearted.

    • 8 months ago
  • mightyfighty2000 Great book - wonder how the series will end!

  • luminiere Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • luminiere Wow... really amazing ending, goldie. I'm jealous of your writing skills...:) I'm really going to miss all this... Jenny and Justing, Kyra and Eben... but then you are going to write about Kyra's adventures, right? I hope so... and if you do, I know it's going to be wonderful, and I would forever be a faitful fan. And of course there's the Frog Prince tag game... still... I can't help but be a little sad... that's just me. But anyway, I loved this last part, and I can't wait for Kyra's adventures!

  • goldielocks24 @karthur Thank you so much :D :D Thank you for being a commited and excited fan :D Figmwent and I really appercitate it :) Don't worry I'll be writing about Kyra's adventures, about her leading the URS :D Once again Thank you :D Maybe we could even open a URS fan club xD

    @figment68 Thank you so much :) It's been a pleasure :)

    @p14hjam Thanks :D

    @mightfighty Thank you :) This is the ending of the series.
    @lumi Thank you so much :) I'm jealous of your writing skills too :) You can capture everybody on storybird with a simple idea or subject- Now thats true writing. :) Yes I will be writing about Kyra's adventures of sure :D Thank you Lumi for your wonderful comment, I will also be sad, but don't worry. Thank you so much! You just made my day :D








  • firstredhead12 Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • firstredhead12 I STILL can't believe its over! Wonderful job figment68 and goldilocks24. You both have an amazing talent with the pen and paper (or in this case, the keyboard and the computer screen). I am a bit sad that I have have read the last chapter of one of the most wonderful series on Storybird, but I know that I can secretly hope that in the future you and figment will start another great and exciting tag game that everyone will love all over again. Great job guys, and keep up the WONDERFUL work!!

  • ivamp Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • Austin_7 Hearted.

    • 7 months ago
  • Austin_7 It's all over. I'm looking forward to the HMC, though...

  • dogcrazy11 That was a TOTALLY awesome series goldie and figment! I'm so glad you made it! It was just fantastic! You two should be real authors! I would buy ALL your books! =)

  • goldielocks24 @firsthead12 Thank you so much :D Maybe Figgy and I will write another series soon ^^ Don't worry Ill be making a new series called HMC :D

    @Austin_7 Thank you :D

  • goldielocks24 @dogcrazy Aww Thank you so much :D

  • Luckyboy22 Hearted.

    • 5 months ago
  • Luckyboy22 NO NO NO!! YOUR KIDDING!! NO NO NO!!
    ITS FINISHED!! ARGGG!!!
    So sad...

    **SOBS**
    **CRIES**

    Uhwell, now I just gotta read 'my frog prince' to see how they will all get united again!!;) It will be so totes good!!!
    CANT WAIT!!:D
    --Luckste

  • goldielocks24 @luckyboy Don't worry :D I'm making another series all about Kyra's Adventures!

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