THE WOODS

Comments (6)

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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 4
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 2
  
  Grade - 88
  Your story itself is very good, but there are a lot of spelling, grammar and punctuation problems. Also, page 6 is a little strange. Can you reword it so that it doesn't sound like the boy just magically appears in his bed?

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  JCBCJBNW says:
  good story it was very interesting

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  mikefisher821 says:
  I always like a good "Mike" story, since that is my name. Great job, interesting story! -Mike Fisher

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaye says:
  Good use of the art TJC.

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  rlobaugh says:
  Love the biker gang on page 5! BUT Holy Writer's Workshop, Batman! Run-on sentences and grammatical errors need to be addressed. I think Mike learned a good lesson, though.

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  monk51295 says:
  Mike is very sharp to make the connection of his father's rules and his love for him.

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)

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