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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 4
  Development - 2
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 3
  
  Grade: 90
  Your story is very original! There are just two small problems - First, some of the pages seem random, or out of place with the rest of the story (page 2, for example). Secondly, there are some punctuation errors on pages 6 and 11.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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