Comments (2)

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  mariahnicole says:
  It's a very good book for little kids to read!

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 2
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 3
  
  Grade: 84
  I don't clearly see how your story addresses the question "Is it better not to know?" Maybe you can change the ending to make it more apparent. Also, there are a bunch of minor spelling/grammar/punctuation errors. Check your wording on page 4, spelling on page 5, and the first sentence on page 8.

  Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)

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