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  • kaye
    kaye says:
    Wow, nice story Mark.
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • bluedogrose
    bluedogrose says:
    Very touching.
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • Herge
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  • aGiantGirl
    aGiantGirl says:
    Mark, thank you, this is beautiful and filled me with gratitude. I'll read it to the girls tonight.
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
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  • 2MGems
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  • Madhatter
    Madhatter says:
    Wow all of your books have so much emotion and feeling and imagry in them. you really can get into a child's (and adults) brain this this amazing and your writing skills are good too
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Ivy
    Ivy says:
    Very Sweet Mark
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • justme
    justme says:
    charming and beautiful...
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Kaydad
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  • TheMecklenburgs
    TheMecklenburgs says:
    Wonderful!
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • zibbycomix
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  • zibbycomix
    zibbycomix says:
    Absolutely beautiful.
    Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
  • nrill1
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  • nrill1
    nrill1 says:
    Beautful!
    Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
  • pinkwatermelon
    pinkwatermelon says:
    ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Posted 23 months ago (Permalink)
  • Mrodred
    Mrodred says:
    Lovely
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
  • Mrodred
    Mrodred says:
    Hey Mark, this may sound greety but I wrote a story and some people told me it was good and I'm not so sure about it. Could you read it so I can tell if it's good?
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  • awesome
    awesome says:
    VIEW MY STORYBIRDS PLZ I WORK VERY HARD ON THEM AND I ONLY GET 16 VIEWS MAX!
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
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  • JAW11
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  • BubbleGum100
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  • BubbleGum100
    BubbleGum100 says:
    It's a good story!
    Posted 19 months ago (Permalink)
  • polgar
    polgar says:
    Beautiful!
    Posted 19 months ago (Permalink)
  • polgar
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  • kadomada
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  • kadomada
    kadomada says:
    I really liked it
    Posted 18 months ago (Permalink)
  • lindsay
    lindsay says:
    Your story's are incredible!!!
    Posted 18 months ago (Permalink)
  • FrolicAndJoy
    FrolicAndJoy says:
    It made my soul smile :)
    Posted 18 months ago (Permalink)
  • Nessiemo
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  • nrill1
    nrill1 says:
    Hey mark, I love this story its so beautiful
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • earthluver
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  • sillybird
    sillybird says:
    This one is my all time fav. It took my breath and my heart when I read it!

    Silly
    Posted 14 months ago (Permalink)
  • Gymnast89
    Gymnast89 says:
    Simply beautiful...
    Posted 12 months ago (Permalink)
  • bblack
    bblack says:
    I figured out what the secret ingredient to your stories is! It is sadness. You must be a magician, because this story took away and created pain within me, especially since I got the feeling that the narrator was dying. This story is my favorite of yours so far. I learn something new every day, and today, you have taught me.
    Thank you.
    Bblack
    Posted 12 months ago (Permalink)
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  • figment68
    figment68 says:
    Beautiful.
    Posted 12 months ago (Permalink)
  • deepfried_freak
    deepfried_freak says:
    sooo cute!
    Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
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  • deepfried_freak
    deepfried_freak says:
    Love it!!
    Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
  • deepfried_freak
    deepfried_freak says:
    You should write an actual book in real life and publish it! I would definitly read it! :)
    Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
  • bblack
    bblack says:
    I would read it, too!
    Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
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  • laney68
    laney68 says:
    Touching
    Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)
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  • fallgirl
    fallgirl says:
    Amazingly breathtaking! ;)
    Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)
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  • ChristianneSBRA
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  • RoseCottage
    RoseCottage says:
    incredible
    Posted 5 months ago (Permalink)
  • Nele
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  • Nele
    Nele says:
    that was great! so short and simple and great!
    Posted 4 months ago (Permalink)
  • miska
    miska says:
    Lovely story Mark!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)

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Published: Sept. 25, 2009
Updated: Sept. 29, 2009
Total Pages: 10
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