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This World

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Aaron Berchild
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This World
Sorry if this isn't very good cos I am just a kid and thanks to Aaron Berchild for brilliant illustrations!
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  • Purplesteffi
    Purplesteffi says:
    Really good story with a nice message
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • mackkirk1
    mackkirk1 says:
    i ove this story! you should make it in to a real book!
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • Ginger
    Ginger says:
    WOW. I love:

    -the rhyming
    -the message
    -and your interpretation of the pictures.

    great work!
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  • emma_meh
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  • emma_meh
    emma_meh says:
    cool i really like this
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • lynn
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  • lynn
    lynn says:
    This is a super litle storybird. I;m sure there'll be lots of others for everyone to enjoy. Great job!
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  • JulieJul112
    JulieJul112 says:
    Awesome story ele_202!
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
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  • TheSilverHound
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  • TheSilverHound
    TheSilverHound says:
    I love your stories! Very meaningful and it starts and ends well.xD! Awesome, keep it up!
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
  • kiyoung
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  • Plateau
    Plateau says:
    This is adorable i especially love this one it has meaning as well as a cause. brilliant.
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  • zibbycomix
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  • emrosec7
    emrosec7 says:
    I love this book! I think it will make people want to help the world so the animals won't be gone. I just have to say thanks for writing it. This book might really change the lives of some Storybird members.can you check some of my books. I really want to hear what you have to say. You're a great author and I would be honored to have you make a comment on one of my stories.
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Soccerrulez
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  • Soccerrulez
    Soccerrulez says:
    AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
  • 1337apple
    1337apple says:
    this book is awsome it makes me imagine of how nature and animals will be when they are not like how they are now
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Satan_Loves_You
    Satan_Loves_You says:
    great ryming, very funny and fun. Happy Face!
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • liesar
    liesar says:
    i think that, that story has a great message
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  • liesar
    liesar says:
    it was a very good book! :)
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • bettybennett
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  • 6B_user4
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  • 6B_user4
    6B_user4 says:
    This story is an awsome story nice job!-user1

    I love this story you did a great job nice work!-user2
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • glenncg
    glenncg says:
    all i can say is..........
    WOW!!!!!
    i love this
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • ralstonhomeschool
    ralstonhomeschool says:
    Hey, cute little story! Soooooo awesome! I wrote a storybird with Aaron berchild's pics too. It is called " Wild Creatures " and its a poem about various wild animals. Great story.
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • bluepride7
    bluepride7 says:
    Where did you find Aaron Berchild
    Posted 18 months ago (Permalink)
  • starintime
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  • starintime
    starintime says:
    Really great. I hope it can sometime get published, so the world will start thinking about endangered animals!(i'm putting this on my reading list :) )
    Posted 17 months ago (Permalink)
  • bblack
    bblack says:
    Where do I get the art?
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • Thewolf
    Thewolf says:
    Please tell me were you got this art. I look for hours each day on the 'create' thing just looking for this theme. Please help,
    -Thewolf
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • JB5C
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  • JB5C
    JB5C says:
    good job
    Posted 14 months ago (Permalink)
  • Polkadotz828
    Polkadotz828 says:
    Great job on this story!!
    Posted 14 months ago (Permalink)
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  • jpurple20
    jpurple20 says:
    wow this is awesome
    i was impressed
    Posted 11 months ago (Permalink)
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  • ele_202
    ele_202 says:
    Aww thanks guys <3 i really appreciate the comments! I haven't been on story bird for about a year now, hoping to get started again!
    Posted 5 months ago (Permalink)
  • americangirl360
    americangirl360 says:
    i LOVE this. It is great!
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Diana111
    Diana111 says:
    what country are you from? and,how do you use the illustrator, "Aaron Berchild" ?????????????????????????????????????????
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
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  • aboestc
    aboestc says:
    i can't find this art?????
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
  • aidanrissa
    aidanrissa says:
    I loved the rhyming, and how the silliness grew into something more meaningful. Chimerical!
    = )
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
  • ele_202
    ele_202 says:
    @ Everyone who asked about the art, i dont know if it has been taken off storybird as it has been well over a year now since i wrote this :)
    Posted 1 month ago (Permalink)
  • yistom
    yistom says:
    GREAT!!!!!!!!
    Posted 3 weeks ago (Permalink)
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  • strawberrysugar
    strawberrysugar says:
    Adorable i loved it you are the best author ever!!!!!!!!!!!! :)
    Posted 4 days ago (Permalink)

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Published: Nov. 1, 2009
Updated: May 1, 2010
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