Comments (5)

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  frstories says:
  i love this one! by me hahaha

  Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
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  frstories says:
  oo i just read it over..its awful..BUT!!! still waiting for my first comment ever on storybird...

  Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
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  mark says:
  Well, the goal of writing and trying new things is to get better. So keep at it. You've got great ideas.

  Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaye says:
  It's a lovely title and idea, but I want to hear more about the mouse!

  Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
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  polgar says:
  Great ideas, but you might want more details.

  Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)

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