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  gabriello says:
  this is another great story

  Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
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  mark says:
  This is adorable.

  Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
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  tweetybirdgirl says:
  although it didn't rhyme it was truly a great story.

  Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaye hearted this

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  thegnome says:
  Thanks everyone for giving positive comments on my work!

  Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
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  thegnome says:
  Hi tweetybirdgirl,
  
  The story does (sort of) rhyme (LOL), but in a more free-form way. And by "free-form", I mean in a more conversational way. I guess I wanted to phase away from the more stricter rhyme patterns like "Jack and Jill went up the hill".

  Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
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  SarahV says:
  That is so cute! I don't have a dog but I have a cat. We used dress her up (Hee hee) for Halleween.

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  SarahV says:
  make sure you carry on because I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  Herge says:
  This is really great. Loved it.

  Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
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  Missmuffet says:
  OK, that's really good, but where's the other half?

  Posted 20 months ago (Permalink)
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  Sunnysammy says:
  Your book is really good.I love the dog!

  Posted 19 months ago (Permalink)
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  kaiulaniartist10 says:
  cool

  Posted 9 months ago (Permalink)

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