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OOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!! WAWAW!!!!! That was totally out there GURL!!! THIS RULES!!!!!!!
:D awesome! I LOVE it!!!!
Allalea!This has just gotten to good! I knew Gregory knew something!!This is to good gurl!
Whoa..........suspence!!!!! Now I'm pretty sure..Greg ahs a crush!!!!!! Great book!!
aaa! ANother great sequel-another left in suspense! Great job, Allalea!
Wow! Great job, as usual. This series is one of my favorites!
I might have gotten to this easier if I'd gotten a link... but no biggie :) Loveee! *says in announcer voice* "And the plot thickens as she realizes that she CANNOT (will not!) allow Kira to fall into the same trap."
@ smiley- Oh my goodness I didn't realize. Usually I give out a link to everyone who comments on any of my Touching Reality stories. I wonder how I missed you (I went through it twice). Oh and this is from Gregory's point of view (he's not a she)
Oh my goodness right back atchya :) Sorry, I personally didn't write that comment. My friend has been getting onto my account and commenting all this stuff on other peoples stories, but I changed my password, so I think it's all good now. I (really, me, the actual smiley,) just read it, and it was sooo good! Great part 5! Who's point of view will part 6 be written by?-Smilesss
@smiley316 Oh that explains it. Thanks for commenting (that is if you are the real smiley. Maybe I need to touch reality lol). Anyway part 6 will probably by from Gregory's point of view. I am thinking of having the4 story follow the photograph. We'll see though :D
Awesome :) Yeah, I had a hack attack but I sorted it out with my friend and changed my password SO... it shouldn't be happening in the future (: Hmm, maybe I'll just have to have a little code or something in each comment so everyone knows it's actually me, haha. ~SMILEY~ :D ~
You are such a good writer, Allalea. Thank you for sharing the link to this awesome series!
@the real smiley- Great. Haha a code would be good. She would probably figure it out and then the whole game would be up! Hehe. Anyway, glad you, the real Smiley, liked it.
Great series Allalea!! :)
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh! im so confused and cant wait for the next part!!!!!!!!! this is sooooo great!!:)
Very mysterious... I loved it! Gregory's awesome, I loved that this story was in his words. His point of view. So the photograph's dangerous? I guess it holds secrets. I can't believe I didn't read this earlier. I guess I thought that I already did, and so I didn't. I'm glad I finally checked! Great job, Allalea! Can't wait for part 6!
Hey Allay!! When is Part 6??!! I CANNOT WAIT 4 IT!!
@Luckyboy- I will soon. High School is so busy!
Gregory contemplates the photograph and shares a little bit of his story
Published: Jan. 29, 2012
Updated: Feb. 1, 2012
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