"What Be Your Tale O' Freedom?"
Doing what you love and following your heart can both be very freeing. Captain Charles Vane, a pirate, thinks the sea is his only love. Until he meets Calyn.
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Published: March 20, 2011
Updated: April 10, 2011
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I kinda lol'd at the end of page 9. Well done overall.
Very cute!
Thank you PeterP and Rasoriffic. This was my first attempt at a pirate story. I like to try going out of my comfort zone. Some times it works out and some times it doesn't. If I ever try a pirate story again, I will have to do more research.
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This book is great! :)
it was a great book and I liked it because it was a pirate story.
SMattox hearted this
very nice!!! A new perspective...it could be a novel!
Thank you for all the hearts and nice comments!
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Arrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! Good story mate!
PET0023 hearted this
I really liked reading this story and the pictures
LOVE PIRATE STORIES!!!!!!
Arr, thank you so much for t' hearts and t' kind comments. I appreciate all o' me storybird buckos takin' t' time t' read me story.
i think its a bit to long but i loved it
AWSOME!!!!!!!
cool book
very long but good i only got to page 10 and give up lol
Cool
Thank you lea839, speedpaso, and WinstonV, 123lissa, and Happy Cupcake!!
Abinator hearted this
Nice book i liked it
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Awesome!!
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Voted for you, StoryBird buddy! Good luck! :)
What an adventurous book and the best one I've had seen so far!
kshea hearted this
wow veary good :) it is a veary long story i dident think it will be that long and that exciting :P well doen
Wow, I loved your book! I love pirate stories and this was a great one. I'll be talkin' t' ya later me hearty!
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Thank you trent65!! :)
:) Thanks, figment. I really do appreciate that. maybe one day, I'll win! lol
Awesomew story dude
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I hope you do nikinoodlesoup, your stories are amazing!!!
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Wow! What a great story! I voted for it!
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Awesome STORY! :) :)
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Hey Figment. It's 12:15am in the UK. Nearly time for the Land of Nod. You're in the lead and I like the cut of your story! Good luck me hearty.
Thank you lolalola, BW30, and aftynn14!!
@figment68: congrrrrrrats on nabbing the final finalist slot in the Challenge!
Thank you so much(from the US)stad11!!
Thank you mark!!
Ah ha and avast. Tis good to be sailing on this one. (when can we stop being pirates? I've not got many pirate language left). Shiver me timbers.
Aye, me storybird bucko, I don't exactly have a full bag o' pirate words either. So maybe this will be t' last. Happy t' have you onboard for t' finals. Good luck t' you.
i didn't really get it when ye said 't. i thought you miss spelled it. i had to read it over and over and over to find out what 't meant.
You create great pirate-speak...story could be shorter or made into a few stories
@ iowadance Maybe I should have added a page translating pirate words to English. I'll do that next time.
@ conantheknitter Thank you! Some people prefer longer stories and some prefer shorter ones. You can't please everyone. Next time I'll try a shorter one. Thank you you giving my longer one a chance.
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I love it!!!!!!!!!
Thank you popcorn68!
This is a pretty good story! Like the pictures! Just i think you should not put in "o" for of, "t" for the.
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Thank you Sergiospanish, jake111, and sofiya05.
Jake111 when I researched the language of pirates I was told to do that. I should have checked other sources too. There seem to be other ideas out there of how pirates spoke.
Another amazing piece by figment68!
way to go figment!
I LOVE IT!
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Party hardy <3 love it
OMG YOU PUBLISHED THIS ON MY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!
Thank you Rosebudlover123! Hope you had a great birthday!!
Well Done!
Thnx!!!!!! luv this story...love writers that step out of their comfort zone to write something they're unsure about its amazing how you got the pirate vocab down...AMAZING!
Tommyb1 hearted this
Great tone! I love how a pirate is telling the story! Great job!
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i love this story soooooooooo much i added it to my reading list hope we can be friends
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Thank you so much lizzie2!!
Congrats on being a finalist! I made some new stories that you might like! I would love for you to check them out!
Thank you fallgirl!! I will check out your stories.
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laney68 hearted this
that was seriously really, really good i want to keep reading it! :)
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Thank you for the heart laney68!
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are you one of the people who made story bird or is your writing just you
and can you check out my new one called"HighSchool."
I unfortunately, did not have any part of creating storybird. It was a genious idea, and I'm glad someone thought of it. My writing is just, me. I will check out your story.
your such a GREAT writer and i think your going to be famous someday
This book is sooooo great! You are very good at writing! :)
Thank you so much lizzie2 and Hannah390!! You made my day.
man you have got a lot of comments
I'm new to storybird so can you help me make good stories because your a fantastic writer
Thank you so much gioch!! Welcome to storybird. I will read more of your stories.
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Awesome figment68
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Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood Story
Really interesting.
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I love this tale its very good! no wonder it was a finalist
Best story ever heard
Amazing!!! I love the detail in this story!!!!!!
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Thank you all for taking the time to read my story, and for the nice comments and hearts!!
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TRANSLATION.THANKS FOR HEARTING.FIGMENT68
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That....was.....fabulous!!!
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CONGRATS!
READ MY BOOKS!! FIGMENT68 ITSELF HEARTED ONE OF MY BOOKS!!! READ READ READ!!!!
THIS IS AWESOME! AND I'M ONLY TEN, BUT STILL ENJOY IT!
My daughter and I read this last night and we LOVED it. Harrrrrrr!
Thank you for the hearts and nice comments!!
Very best book I've ever read!
That is a awesome story, Congrats
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I loved it!
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This is a very long story! I loved it
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great story!!!
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this story is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that book is funny.Thanks for commenting on my books
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SethCurl hearted this
That story was awsome. I just published a pirate story too.
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Thank you for the hearts SethCurl, isquirrel21, and nola2000!
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CassidyCogin hearted this
awesome and funny story if i was a critic i would rate this over 100
I love it! If you like Fairy Tales read The Fox Tail series by bubblePOP2!
Thank you so much CassidyCogin, Ladiesman123, and bubblePOP2!!
I do like fairy tales, I will check it out.
@SethCurl I couldn't find your pirate story, are you sure it is public?
Riwey hearted this
I loved this story it was awesome!!!!!
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Thank you so much Riwey, hollyjustsayyes, and SHSgirl101!!
this is one of the best stories ever...well beside mine!lol but seriously, your awsome!
Even though I am 9 I really like this book, I understand why it was a finalist!
It's great and I was a bit confused with pirate language though...
Me: Cool, yeah awesome!
Book: Blah Blah Me hearty Blah Ahrgh!
Me: Huh? What the-?
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i like your story
Nice
AlexStrawberry hearted this
great story :D
I love your stories! Do you think you could read some of mine sometime? :D
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Thank you so much for the nice comments and hearts!!
@ balloonfire, next time I will have to add some translations for the language of pirates for those who are not familiar with their jargon.
best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
how do u heart stories?i loved ur story
Great story! I like the pirate talk thing you did there.
Thanks for the heart onyx4219!!
I'm not really in to pirates and all that stuff,but I really enjoyed your story.It was really intersting so I think i'm going to heart it.Thanks for letting me read such an interesting story.
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I thought it was well done- I liked how the pictures helped tell the story! :)
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Silvershine hearted this
Hey Figment68 it's bubblePOP2 I just wanted to let you know that the whole series of Fox Tail was just released but Fox Tail 5 will be released soon!
Thank you samlovesham, samd633!
@kmc22 Thank you so much for reading my story, even though pirate stories aren't usually your thing!
Thank you tenzinc, ashbthom, castilloaileen01, abeerah89,and Silvershine!!
@bubblePOP2 I will be sure to read the whole series.Thank you. :)
seems tricky to wright but u did a awesome job
PS.a made a couple of stories if u want to check them out
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wow I was blown away by this story I absolutely,positively think this is the best book I have ever read !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe how well you write !!!!!! BY MeganI
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Thank you for all the hearts, and the nice comments!!
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dragonsrcool hearted this
great story. i'l hart this
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Very nice story. Well done.
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Great story!!
<3 hearted this! Why are people saying''Hearted this''.Ok now i just said it.
cute book
WOW IT IS THE BEST STORY EVER I LOVE THE STORY I WANT TO READ IT OVER AND OVER AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!
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OMG this is awesome... great story... YEAH BUDDY!!!! :)
daw24 hearted this
so cool
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AWESOME!!!!!!!
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I thought it was a little too long, but I LOVED IT!!!
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thankz again for liking my story. btw i made too new ones! hope ya like 'em!
good book
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Best story in the world.
Best book in the universe.
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Really good book i like!!!!!!
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Thank you, everyone for all the hearts and nice comments!
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Congrats figment68 4 this story being the most active story on storybird!:):1:}:];)<3:D=)d:
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i love the story! and i love pirates :)
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Nashell hearted this
It sounds scary!
Great Story. Its really good!!!!!.
i understand that you uesed piriate talk but it was SUPER hard to understand and in in 4th geade so not that far off the age range but it was OK so.....
porterju hearted this
Thank you for all the nice comments, and hearts!!
cat61 hearted this
nice
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flyinpig hearted this
Wow, great story!
Hay you must have taken a long time?
MadisonCl hearted this
OMG now thats a GOOD book!!!
rocking nice:)
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Thank you so much cat61, rex800, flyinpig(love the avatar!), station17, and MadisonCl!!
@ Station17 It did take a while to write. I had to do a little research about pirates and how they speak too. I wanted to try a pirate story, but the fact that I have been on 'The Pirates of the Caribbean' ride at Disneyland a handful of times did not qualify me as an expert, by any means, on pirates. :)
DeekshaSriram123 hearted this
love dis me harty arrgghh!
Durkin11 hearted this
Looooooooove it. So awsome. Really cute too. Make more!!!!!!!!!!
How long did it take???? Did I say it was cute. :) By the way cute avatar Silvershine!!!!!!!!!
love it!!!!:) your so good at making storybird's. No wonder why you were a finalist.YOU'R AMAZING at making storybird's!!!!!!
Weird but cool. Good story. you sould write a sequal!
tigerbeatlover99 hearted this
Thank you for the hearts and nice comments!!
@ Dragonrider33 I am not sure how long it took. I write here and there as I have time.
@tigerbeatlover99 I will consider a sequal.
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I LOVE IT
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awesome
Thank you Peter_Burns!
Thanks for the hearts guavapj, bandsforlife, and Bono123!!
I love it!!!
you rock at story birds. I can't believe you were a finalist. No wonder. Your so good at storybirds.
hw do u enter your books for competitions?
WOW DUDE THIS STORY IS SO AWESOME!!! I LOVED HOW YOU WROTE IT IN PIRATE LANGUAGE!!!! I REALLY LIKE PIRATES SO THAT IS WHY I LIKE YOUR STORY SO MUCH. YOU SHOULD REALLY CHECK OUT SOME OF MY STORIES. THEY ARE GOOD BUT NOT AS GOOD AS YOUR PIRATE STORY. I AM GOING TO WRITE A PIRATE STORY NOW AND IT'S THANKS TO YOU!! THANKS FOR BEING SO INSPIRING DUDE. PS REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY GOOD STORY DUDE. PPS I REALLY LIKED YOUR STORY IT WAS SO REALLY GOOD, AND AWESOME!!!
FROM YOUR PAL: BRYSONBO
It's awesome
falcon99 hearted this
Thank you so much Rian10, mano111, brysonbo, and falcon99!!
@mano111 Go to the top of the page. Click on 'CREATE' scroll down to 'b' and click on 'Learn about April Challenge' Beginnings.
@ brysonbo I am happy to hear I inspired you. I will definitely read your stories!
That is an amazing story i really enjoyed reading it please read my story and comment
@ brysonbo Your stories are not public. Please let me know when they are so I can read them. Thanks.
hi! it was really good but I'm sorry but I couldn't understand the pirate talk. Still, good job!!
sspscch hearted this
I loved your story soooooo much, I could not stop reading it!!! I really liked the use of pirate language all the way through, it was very funny! It was really sweet at the end when Captin Charles married Calyn. Could you please read my stories: "Balloon ride", "Betrayed" and "Where are they?" Thanks.
Eleanor Baldwin 12
@sspscch I understand. I have thought about writing another without all the pirate jargon, for those who don't speak 'pirate.'
@missdavidson Thank you so much! I would love to read your stories. I have a busy day today, but I will read them soon.
@ alynon Thank you so much!
Hey, it's mechanist413 here and I say, job well done matey!
LOVE THIS STORY LIKE FOREAL
That should be a real published story I love it so much!
RMoore2 hearted this
the story eas pretty long but it was good
Thank you so much for the hearts and nice comments!
Wow
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im a pro writer and thats better than my stories!!!!!!
you win!!!
Thank you for trying to find my stories. If you click on the symbol by my message the stories come up. Eleanor Baldwin 12
Cool dude!
I'm not even a big pirate person, but I really enjoyed this!
Thank you so much for the hearts and nice comments!!!
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KiplerisHiplerWOPIE hearted this
this is of da hook dude! ur a talented guy!
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you should have won!!
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Thank you so much 236, Dulskibraves2, MarthaEJMS, Pickle03, KiplerisHiplerWOPIE, Xgen1mug, barbie4545, and ExtremlyAwesome!!!
figment68 do you know half these people
Wow that was an amazing story.
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Thank you so much for the hearts and nice comments!!!
@jackniesse No, I only know one person on storybird personally. The rest I just know from reading each others stories on storybird, and commenting.
Gosh! It took me like 5 minutes to scroll down all the comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Probably cos you were a featured author. BTW, great story YET AGAIN. And no, I do not find capitals fun LOL.
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your a pro
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Nice! You are a bird at heart! I love ALL of your storybirds! Keep type a type typing! SEE YA FRIEND! U RULE!
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i love it i heart this for share
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awesome book dude! I did not read all of your books but i will and i bet they are graet!
summerwing hearted this
i really liked your book
you are a great writer
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Thank you so much cookie54lover, DeekshaSriram123, salamack, catherineportia1112, newcity777, puglover, brysonmarlin, tariahw, appleChan, summerwing, and 27willa!!! I appreciate everyone taking the time to read my story, and heart and comment on it! :)
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This is very interesting. If you're a female, I can understand how hard it is for females to write stories on boyish topics. But I think I can see your effort on this! =D
Thank you fionnas88888!!
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hope this is the winner
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Th71 hearted this
Win this competion!
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I love your story
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You right storys VERY well...congrats.
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I really liked your story! It was good and thanks for commenting on my story! I think I like your story more than ever!
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i like this!!!
this si so good. and thanks for commenting on mine. BUt my other one is so much better it is called Judging HUrts, i hope you can read it please becasue i really want to get a good grade for school please!!!!!!!!!! anyway this was a really great story
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I Liked THat story you r a good autour
love it! i hope it wins!
thank you jonas13, thorpetr, andrewgmirkin, and Julianna4r!!
WOW! THE BEST STORYBIRD I HAVE EVER READ!!!! ;-)
Ugh! Sorry if I missed you. Sometimes names pop up after I have commented.So...
Thank you catherineportia1112! Hope you get a good grade on your story. It is really well done.
@lovleymee Thank you!
@brandonwallace and badkittty Thank you so much!
Thank you for the heart jolynh!
WOW!
Really like it!
Well done for winning the competition
5linnea hearted this
thanks for messenging me on my boerd how did u get so many wins???
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Nice story...pretty cool, I loved the title! REAllY cool story, I loved the pirate angle
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I have read this story at least 4 times, but every time I read it it feels like the first.
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A buckarootastic story. LOVED It PEACE
long, but i loved it
Interesting, can you tell me, where did you learn to talk like that? Even if I tried Its hard for me t talk like this AAAARRRGGGGHHHH!
Thank you so much for all the hearts and nice comments everyone!!
@ SophiaLauren I googled "How to talk like a pirate." I just tried again and I did not see the same one I read. There are others though. If I find the same one I'll let you know.
Thank you for the heart anor2002!
BHAH HA HA HA.Oh thats adorable. His "I've shoved off" scroll. Excellent work Figment.
darkangel199912345 hearted this
Best story ever!!! <3
It was brill!
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Thank you for the hearts and the nice comment!!!
I wouldn't even have to read the story to know its so good, all you have to do is look at the 303 comments!! But it was awesome!!!!! All of your Storybirds absolutely ROCK! Keep it up!
i love it! i dont know if you remember me but youve read my books too!
Thank you so much HardsRich!!!!
Thank you badkittty, and I do remember reading your stories!! Thank you for checking out mine.
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I see why they say this ones a finalist.
awesome story
adorable story!!
Great story!
I wish I could write that well...
If you would like to read one of my stories, type "bored"
Thank you all so much for the nice comments!!!!
JYi1 hearted this
Awesome story! Love it!
I should tell some of me hearties to read this story. ARRGH!
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HAzza135 hearted this
Arg, That be t' best pirate story that I have ever read in all o' me grand ol' life, wonderful story! It was awesome and sweet.
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Thank you so much AuthorAnonymous, JYi1, and HAzza135!!
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Thank you so much for all the hearts and nice comments!!
@newcity777 That is tough to answer, because I'm not sure. I write here and there when I have time. My best guess would be 4 hours? Thank you for all the 'GREATS'! :)
Do you plan on entering May's contest?
Good Story
mm283 hearted this
@ ag4 I actually just entered one. :)
Thank you ZachSS, WilPhi and mm283!!!
@festes I have finished with all my schooling. Although I occasionally take a class for fun.
cool story cool story LOVE IT
way to be a finalist takes a lot awesome job
cool
that waz an awessome story! Sorry, I only read to page 16 cuz I got so lost in all the pirate talk, I started talking like it at home! Haha maybe I'll finish it tomorrow xD
Thank you so much willowb, slayer3521, PB45, and drewanna!!!
lpenrod hearted this
Thank you for the heart Ipenrod!!
How do you find the to write all these stories, as well as edit them?
I like your story it makes me fell the salt water splash in my mouth and i felt like i was there.
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
attheparty13 hearted this
billiatm hearted this
Awesomest story ever!
Thank you for all the nice comments and hearts everyone!!
ag4 I write here and there as I have time, which adds up I guess. :)
stonej I was inspired by 'Ingvard the Terrible' illustrations, and thought I would give a pirate story a try.
areske hearted this
i think its great!!!
Thank you areske and starBob!!
allexD hearted this
Hi figment68
last year i commented on one of your story's and that was pretty good but nothing as good as this!!!!
IsaacJJJJJ hearted this
figment63 You have been commenting on huatyre I am his brother other that it was really good
ollie123 hearted this
Thank you for all the hearts!!
@kiwifruit Thank you, I must be improving. That is nice to hear.
this is the best story i have ever read! you're stories make u sound like a pro. i hope all the people that read this think highly of u
That was awesome!
delendrecie hearted this
that was cool then mine but i am not a kid this is just a picture when i was a kid
everybody how did you do heart's
i like it!!!!!!
Hugo4G hearted this
I love this story and now sometimes I wonder what is freedom?
Thank you so much for the nice comments and hearts!!!!
@prinze2002 Above stories on the right you can click on 'heart this story.' This will put a red heart from you in their comments.
juliam1 hearted this
parthisgreat hearted this
great story and good luck on the next contest ^^
Thanks for the hearts juliam1 and parthisgreat!
your lucky
you did a very very good job
cool story
Thank you so much 22crcorre and trentosartain!!
Oustounding Wonderful Amazing Fantasically cool piratey,lassy,laddy story you got there hehe =D. Amazing Job Would've Voted For U!!!Once Again Amazing
RedRum350Z hearted this
Added It To reading list...
i love your storys!!!!
cool
danslo hearted this
soooooo cool, love your storybird!
:)! cool!
@RedRum350Z Thank you so much!! This lassy appreciates it. :)Is redrum from the Shining? (mirrored) That was a great movie.
Thank you badkittty, robertsone, and danslo!!!
IT'S DA BOM! (:
why were the ofs and the thes i think go like this o' and t'?
cdangelo hearted this
u aargg very good at writing stories:] LOL
That is so awesome
Thank you chlem1415!! :)
Thank you so much PaigeJ2!! That is so nice of you to say.
@Lukie8 When I looked up 'how to speak like a pirate' I read this is how they talk. I only checked one site, others vary.
Thanks for the heart cdangelo!
Thanks for the heart srapacz!!
jacp hearted this
@ jacp Thank you for the heart!
pirates speak so weirdly, o' and t' what is that all about, oh well it was good
I LOVE IT!!!!
Thank you so much RanStudent14 (It is hard to speak like a pirate.), huatyre, rushmin12, and danmor!!
1Hamster hearted this
That was the best storybird ever
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that was a good book
Thanks for the hearts 1Hamster and jessto!!
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Thank you for the hearts!!
Great Story umm I think its just right!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you ken5!!
Thank you renee123657!!
JazzieJ hearted this
Great story i loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
where did you get the idea it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing. you rock
Thanks for the heart JazzieJ!!
TheoSuperman hearted this
Very good
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GOOD STORY
THATS THE BEST STORY EVER/.
Thank you for the hearts!!
cool
arieannaevan hearted this
wow how did you ever think of a story like that no wonder it is a finalist
this story is so good i just cant stop my self from reading this over and over again
This was good. It liked this story no wonder you were a finalist. Good job. I hope you make a sequel.
indeed, this be one book matey, Ye should keep up the good work me matey
loganlion hearted this
figment68, you are the best writer ever!!!!! thank you so much for hearting my books!
Loved the story, really good and the pictures are awesome. Plus, I LOL'd a bit at one of the pictures. Above all, 10 out of 10. Keep up the great work. Seeya
I love's me a good tale of skullduggery! Arrrr!
keirbird10 hearted this
Wonderful job Figment, just like on all your other stories. You NEVER disapoint me gurlie! :]
- Bacon
baconbaby511 hearted this
Almost as good as Chuck Norris! (You know it is impossible to be better than Chuck Norris, right?)
Kyle100 hearted this
Thank you for all the really nice comments and hearts everyone!!
I hope to never disappoint you baconbaby511! :)
@Kyle100 The ultimate compliment! Chuck Norris can slam a revolving door! And he can kick the wet out of water!!
@ arieannaevan Thank you! That makes me happy to know you enjoy it so much!! :)
Oh my gosh.That is AWESOME!
i like you
awesome story !!!! congrats
Thank you so much shae2h, nick2h, and teetl!!
deepfried_freak hearted this
I can't believe I am just now reading this... It is so good! I love it! ☺♥♫
Thank you so much carrio and deepfried_freak!!
awesome book!!
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ThunderBolt360 hearted this
Thank you justice2876 and ThunderBolt360!!
Wildhorseisland hearted this
added to reading list!
i am still reading this story over and over again. GGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT SSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thanks for reading and commenting on my story. u r the only one that has commented on it besides me.
salamack hearted this
Thank you so much for all the hearts and nice comments!!!!
dannyhidalgo hearted this
Hope you make the finals!!!! :D
dannyhidalgo. the story already made it to the finals
Thank you. It was a longer story.
cool and u have a long string of comments! it took me a long time to reach down here
Thank you ojx!! I click on the little square and pull it down to the bottom of the page now, instead of hitting the down arrow and waiting.
omg! loved that!
Thank you so much recycle656!!!
Me O' Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much shoeclass!! :)
Thanks for the heart huanga5!
IT was cool
Thank you gabbyh and chrhaw7!!
@ huanga5 I am not sure ho long this story took. I write whenever I get the chance.
WOW YEY
That story is sooo long but sooo good mr harties'!!
<3
Thank you so much Aytug, 24958, and Maijo!!!
Cool pirate story!
gabrielcrockett hearted this
Thank you so much Josie03 and gabrielcrockett!!
Thank you sapphirejems!!
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you zedik!!
flecki hearted this
This story is awesome. im not surprised you were a finalist
mekj13 hearted this
Thank you so much flecki and mekj13!!!
early hearted this
Wow figment68 you're so popular I wish I were you, no one ever reads for my storybirds. :(
the book rocks will you make more?
Thank you so much for the hearts and nice comments!
@ Titanic8642 It can take some time before you get a larger group checking out your stories! Plus being over 18 and able to put your stories in the challenges helps. You have some wonderful bunny stories like Cherry Blossom and chloe! Enjoy writing your stories for you, and when more people discover your stories you will get more comments.I will definitely be reading your stories! :)
@ dakota46x Thank you. I have other storybirds published. As far as pirate stories, I may try another.
Its ok
Thanks for reading my story Annahah!!
@ 24958 I will give it another try soon!! Thank you.
pnut99 hearted this
Thanks pnut99!!
cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool book
aahns2011 hearted this
bookloverjoy hearted this
Thank you so much 24958, aahns2011, and bookloverjoy!!
Awesome prate story
Nice book liked it!
Thank you so much Sandrathom, and Cutie1410!!
In Who Is Figment68 one of your comments says that your name is in this story, but is not the main character. Is your real name Scotty??
hi
standing outshone that's aswome
-A
wongb3145 hearted this
@ bubblePOP2 My name is not Scotty. :)
Thank you so much alyciao12!!
Thank you wongb3145!!
peabodygirls hearted this
Did you win anything for this story????
I won a copy of my book. Pretty cool! :)
How did you come up with such an amazing story!? Please write more!
TOO GOOD
Thank you so much flowercrown and riverbear2000!!!The art inspired the story. :)
sydnylove hearted this
So good! You totally deserved to be a finalist! I could never write that. As for the pirate talk, A+! :)
lemonade5678 hearted this
aless_1_awesome hearted this
Congrats on being a featured Storybird author!
Great story me bucko! Hope you be makin' more!
Thank you for the hearts!!
@lemonade5678 Thank you so much!! I have no doubt you could write a story like that. :)
@ Mrs.Rex Thank you so much!!
Good job great storie you should be an author when you grow up!!!
williamxie3 hearted this
Shannon9 hearted this
Thank you so much 1flower!!
Thanks for the hearts!!!
Thanks for the advice figment68 but i'm afriad it's going to be 8 years before I can enter a contest!But i'm impoving on my stories! Also the person who told me about storybird now has less stories than me! She has 7 I have 44!!!
Is your name one of the following?
1. Melissa
2. Carol
3. Wilma
4. Anne
5. Marylin
6. Jennifer
7. Sally
8. Calyn
9. Jade
If it is one of these names, which one is it?!?!?!?!
I am absolutely dying to know!
bblack hearted this
Congratulations my friend on being a featured author!
PinkiePie hearted this
you are sooooooooooooooooooooo cooooooooooooooooooooooool
you are sooooooooooooooooooooo cooooooooooooooooooooooool
Good Job!!
Ilove it! It's so cool!
HaileyH6 hearted this
@Titanic8642 You have quite a collection of stories! Great job.
@ bblack That is so funny. I don't want to torture you! Yes one of those names is mine. :)
Thank you so much Lauren4m and PinkiePie!!!!
Thanks for the heart HaileyH6!!
REAL GOOD MAN REAL GOOD
peytonmaninngfan38 hearted this
i gota say this is really a good book i love it so much you make it mine look bad that really good for you!
Lilbratz101 hearted this
Thank you peytonmaninngfan38, Lilbratz101!!
Could your name be Jennifer? Poor bblack, being tortured like that :)
Best p book I'v herd ever
@richart Maybe. :)
Thank you livvyb!
that is a orsom book and crepy at the same time
Swimmer101 hearted this
Barrowby hearted this
Thank you Swimmer101 and Barrowby!!
Thank you arose6 and Swimmer101!!!
so what is your name?
Super book, Figment68!!!
Congrats on being on the featured author list!!
wow I'm surprised you didn't win
Geuss what! The Love Story is on season 2!
kittykat256 hearted this
Love your stories, Allof them.
julrh1415 hearted this
I love the story so much!!!The story just grabs me!!!
Thank you all so much for the hearts and nice comments!!
i luv your books! u r awesome!!!!!! :) :)
awsome
bad to the bone with an arggggggggggggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for telling me your first name,in return i'll tell you 3 other storybird member's names. Charm09887's name is Celebrity. Rose84's name is Chastadae. And Black12340's name is Tatiyana but me and her friends call her T.T or Tati.
Thank you so much for the hearts and nice comments!!! Thanks Titanic8642! :)
wow!1
Dear figment68,
Thanks for the advice,your really good at it. Right now i'm still in Love Story Mode,so bye for now!
Sinccerly,
Titanic8642
Thank you so much Nightsparrow2260!!
Thank you Titanic8642! I look forward to reading more of your Love Story series. :)
Riley123 hearted this
Thats a good story!!
Thank you so much Riley123 and funinthesun2!!
Will you please read my storys in paticular, I am me.
You are such a GOOD author, you are FAMOUS i bet!
cvssh hearted this
hi figment! remember me? 613589? well, i have a friend whos username is dragonrider33, and i showed her your books, and she LOVED THEM! :) I think she commented on one of ur storybirds i think. Congrats for being a finalist and featured author! I love ur stories! You are really nice too! u always reply every comment! SO NICE! :)
Thank you funinthesun2 so much!! I am definitely not famous. :)
Thank you cyssh!
soz cbf readying this lol :P xx
Book 4 of "High School Drama" is out.
flowergirl18 hearted this
I can't wait to read the rest of this story!
Thank you so much TJef and flowergirl18!!!
I'll check it out Titanic8642!!
ashleyluv4 hearted this
Hi figment68! great story! I left a comment up there and i think you missed it cause you left a thanks comment thats right after mine but you didnt say thanks for my comment so i was just wondering if thats what happened!
Thank you ashleyluv4!!
@ walktwomoons Aargh! So sorry me bucko! You have been t' victim o' a slow t' appear comment, and an appreciative author that overlooked you somehow. :( I guess I'll have t' walk t' plank now.
Thank you for your very kind comment!
i love it!!
starlightgirl hearted this
Thank you so much violazha and starlightgirl!!
613589 hearted this
congrats on being in the "best of storybird challenges" :)
Thank you so much 613589!!
OMG your on the "best of storybird challenges" ,figment?!
Well,congragulations!
Titanic8642 hearted this
Thanks Titanic8642! I think they keep rotating them. Sometimes I'm there sometimes I'm not, which is very cool. It is fun to see all the different stories from all the challenges.
Don't walk the plank! please! your stories are to good to end!
Jayciebug hearted this
Thank you Jayciebug!!
LOVED
Me4u hearted this
@ walktwomoons I won't. :) Although I was going to wear water wings,an innertube and diving gear.
Thank you Me4u!!
WHAT IS YOUR NAME????
arolls20 hearted this
I bet this is the only pirate book on Storybird!
Ahoy!
Ahoy matey!
Ummm figment you told bblack that your name was in that list she made....
Is it Jennifer? That's my moms name. :) :) :)
That was amazing! I especially loved the way you punctuated it as if you were a real pirate speaking like one too. Love the storyline and will definately be adding this to my reading list :)
figment,guess what! My sister's B-Day is next Sunday! She'll be 9 this year! What do you think I should get her? Webkinz or L.P.S?
A Webkinz is a stuffed toy that can enter a virtriral world and a L.P.S is a small plastic toy.
@ smiley316 Your Mom and I have the same name. :)
@ molo Thank you so much!!
@ Titanic8642 That is a really hard question. My daughter is 8 and she would love them both. If you know she'd prefer one over the other go with that. I personally am leaning toward the webkinz. I like stuffed animals. :)
WOW!! That's a real adventure story me lad!!!!!
chessness hearted this
Thank you chessness!!
QuillAndInk hearted this
I liked it! It was cute and sweet.
I love this story! It is one of my favorite stories!!!!!!!! I put it on my reading list. And I'm going to write my Tale 'o freedom :) I will show it to you as a response!
Thank you QuillAndInk!!
Thank you so much goldielocks24!! I can't wait to read your tale!!
How old are you? Your GREAT!!! I wish I could do storys like you!!!!!
Me and my friend red it and we had a hard time saying the words but we still loved it so much. You should read my stories they'er like yours.
Thank you chessness!! I'm an adult.
Thank you so much maddieschoeneberger!! It is tough to grasp the pirate language. :)
VHEE hearted this
Amazing story!! You are an amazing author! please read my stories!!
Thank you VHEE!!
cdavi370 hearted this
Thank you cdavi370!!
@ tightropetdc You snuck in up there. Thank you so much!! I'd be happy to read your stories.
cold you plz tell me how to enter stories?? and check out my pirates of the caribbean story!!
I love this story its very inspiring and one question how did you get your story so good that you became a finalist??????
@ iowadance There are no challenges this summer. If they have another challenge, when you are publishing your book it will ask you at the bottom under 'recommended age range' if you are entering your story in the challenge. Click on yes and answer any questions. I'd love to read your story!
@ loveyou25 Thank you so much. The art inspired my story, and I did a little research about pirates and how they speak.
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cs2n hearted this
@ wn2020 Thank was quite an Aagh matey!! Thank you. :)
Thank you cs2n and MatthewK4!!!
DG3 hearted this
SHIVER ME TIMBERS MATEY YER STORY IS DEFIANTLY THE BEST
mileslin3 hearted this
cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you so much DG3, mileslin3, and declan18!!!!
THAT TOOK FOR YEARS TO SCROLL DOWN THERE!
THE BOOK WAS GREAT!
i didnt like this one so much but it was still pretty good
That was AWESOME!fab!Puh-leeze check out my new storys No one to love?! and I am me
I loved this story! The way it was written (perfect pirate talk), the story, in short, everything was amazing. I'd seen this story but had never decided to read it. I'm glad I did. Great job!
soularcher hearted this
Thank you so much for all the nice comments!! :)
OMG I loved it perfection
Thank you so much Tommy326!!!
tking5 hearted this
This was a great book and wish to read more like it =P.
Thank you tking5!!
Figment68, your work is so great, i'm going to write a whole book about you. and thank you for reading most of my book and hearting them and commenting them. i live your work.
i loved it as always what a good story
Thank you so much grandmalovesme!!! That is so sweet of you. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful stories!
Thank you so much danielle31!!!!
2L10 hearted this
daphne552 hearted this
that was a really good book. and its funny im watching pirates of the caribbean right now! LOVE IT!
nice pirate language!!
Well written, figment68!=)
MP4002 hearted this
Thank you so much 2L10, daphne552, and armlessmeat!!
Very nice pirate tale and language! You deserve to be a finalist!
luminiere hearted this
Thank you so much MP4002 and luminiere!!!
cself hearted this
Thank you cself!!
loved it!!!!!!!!!!! ,<3
Thank you so much nem!!
hmayer1 hearted this
wow I love how a pirate is telling the story this is defently a favourite!
lizzie24 hearted this
Love your pirate tale and I also love you pirate voice. Great job!
Rainbow741 hearted this
Thank you so much hmayer1, lizzie24, and Rainbow741!!! :)
chinat hearted this
love it!!! :)
Thank you so much chinat!!!
loved the story
Thank you bentivegnaa!!
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ktippins hearted this
My 3 year old bro just bent my fav. pen! (:o
Thank you for the hearts!!
@ Titanic8642 So you have to tape paper to the wall to write now? :)
@extremelyawesome,
funny icon pic! where did u get it?
Awesome story!!!
elvarocks98 hearted this
Thank you so much elvarocks98!!
Hannahpuls hearted this
awsome i really loved it!~!!!!!!!!!!!!
you are a great writter i also love the blurb this is one of my favourote books now keep on doing books like this and you would be famous you could be an auother
i really really really really really really really really really really really really really LLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE IIIIIIIIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
Thank you so much Hannahpuls!!!:)
Austin_7 hearted this
LOLOLOL!!!!! Great story figment!!!
Thank you Austin_7!!
the other day i wrote a simillar story but urs is awesome it beats every other story!
@ SMRPS1 Thank you, I bet your story is good too.
edolosa hearted this
I really appreciate if you check out my stories
Thank you edolosa!!
Please check out my stories! I would appreciate it alot. :)
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Dragongal hearted this
Perfect!
really good
cheak out my story invasernoid
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Thank you for all the hearts and nice comments!! I will check out your stories too. :)
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what a great story!
jkvanessa hearted this
Thank you so much Poppyawesome, iamseventeen, and jkvanessa!!
Charlenester hearted this
Thank you Charlenester!!
WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS YOU R GOING 2 BE FAMOUSE ONE DAY OF COURSE
@ RoCkOuT99 Thank you so much!! That is so nice of you to say. :)
great job i vote for u
Thank you so much 1as6!
xbox3000 hearted this
cute
micaelarocks hearted this
@ xbox3000 Thank you for the heart!
@ micaelarocks Thank you!!
This be a very fine story.
Pintolina hearted this
Thank you so much Pintolina!! :)
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@ Abigailspeech and boogieboo9 Thank you for the hearts!!
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very nice
@ Nolanml Thank you!! :)
Thank you for the hearts!!
@ just3209 Thank you!!
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PercyJackson16 hearted this
love this book
Thank you for the hearts!!!
@ okay Thank you so much!!
cool story bird
@ akellybtw Thank you so much!!
Emanuel771 hearted this
awesome story so far i'm sad i only got to read to page 7
@ Emanuel771 Thank you for the heart!
@ brookej22 Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest! :)
nolaroberts hearted this
shiver me timbers that was good
What an amazing story I LOVE IT
Vannila hearted this
@ nolaroberts Thank you for the heart!!
@ travivini Thank you so much!! :)
@ Vannila Thank you so much!! :)
I did not read it yet but when I do I will post on the book. I
just want to say right now your books are so cool!
Wow! This is a really good story bird! I knew it was going to be cool since the very first time I saw who wrote it! I knew that one of your books were going to be a finalist! Who does not like your books? Keep on writing cool story birds! Try not to get writing block! Good Luck!
cutienkl hearted this
@ cutienkl Thank you so much!! That is so sweet of you to say. I will try not to get writer's block. :)
Nice story bird. i like it very much.
@ 1266213 Thank you so much!
Fireandice hearted this
SUUUUUPPPPEEERRR CUTE STORY! ESPECIALLY HOW YOU PUT IT WITH A PIRATE ACCENT! I L-O-V-E-D THAT!!
@ Fireandice Thank you so much!!
lenaleo hearted this
i love pirates i loved it
@ lenaleo Thank you so much!
coool story!!! I lve it
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@ Nolanml Thank you!! :)
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Thank you for the hearts febbo and atidum!! :)
@ thestorywriter Thank you so much!! That made my evening. :)
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wow! this story is really popular! i can see why, cos this is a really good story. i can tell that you took time making this, and i like how you put a pirate accent on every page. i'm glad that this story bird is a finalist.
@ sunnydays0 and sausage02 Thank you for the hearts!
@ missymiss Thank you so much!!! :)
Nice job:)
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Thank you for the hearts rossbj01 and campbellta03!!
Awsome book
@ GarrettB12 Thank you so much!!
I just love your stories!
@ storytrooper Thank you so much!!
seraphja2021 hearted this
Nice pirate language!!!
@ seraphja2021 Thank you! :)
Awesome story matey.
@ MIG30 Thank you! :)
mak36 hearted this
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cool
@ mak36 Thank you for the heart!
@ bagweem Thank you! :)
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@ naki2002 Thank you so much!!
Love It
It was best
@ trinhbui Thank you!! :)
nice figment68 i love how you comment on all my storys
@ sweetie8 Thank you! I enjoy reading your stories.
Great story
love this story its awesome
@ gdawes and jsmall Thank you both so much!!
BEST BOOK EVER.
nothing is better then that and i reapet NOTHING!!!
awsome
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@ storytrooper Thank you so much!!
@ tbdejordy Thank you so much!! :)
InspireMeStories hearted this
nice dued
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@ InspireMeStories Thank you for the heart!
@ mack88 Thank you!!
@ albaxt Thank you for the heart!!
so good this can not be your first pirate tale
@ jsmall Thank you so much! It is actually. I had to look up tips on talking like a pirate. :)
Reaganrock hearted this
BRILL STORY I LOVE IT
@ Reaganrock Thank you for the heart!
@ kyle31 Thank you so much!! :)
The pirate languege was kinda hard to understand but it was VERY creative.
rad...diservs an A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A IN MY HEART.
@ americangirl360 Thank you!
@ kschell Thank you so much!
I don't mean to critisize ,this is good but, if you're trying tto sound like a pirate, I think it should be tha instead of thee
@ dillard86 Thank you! You could be right, I looked up how to speak like a pirate and took their advice. I don't know if it varies from place to place or not.
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@ jordgubbe and srikarroe Thank you for the hearts!!
LOVE PIRATE STORIES
@ skullhead55 Thank you for reading mine! :)
Love the cover dude this book is awsome I am glad that you won
@ 1863513 Thank you so much! :)
Awesome book.
how did you enter in to a contest when will they start up again?
@ jacCRA Thank you!!
@ sweetie8 I don't know when it might start up again. It is only for those 18 and up though for legal reasons.
hodsonj hearted this
Awesome matey!!!
AWESOME!!"!!
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Love it man I put it on my reading list and I told solomni and ohaloran to read it my favourite book on storybird ever.
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so cool!
@ hondurasglee Thank you so much! :)
@ asiegel04 Thank you for the heart!
too cute to be true!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@ amberly Thank you so much! :)
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50562 hearted this
awesome story
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awsome
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norwaybound658 hearted this
Great, me matey! :D
@ norwaybound658 Why thank you so much me bucko! (bucko-friend)
i like it.
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@ jmcguire Thank you!
Vidza hearted this
Three words...I like it
it reminds me of my cusin
@ Vidza Thank you for the heart!
@ carterangel Thank you! I like those 3 words.
@ 223026 Nice. :)
Pirate storeies are nice.
You did an outstanding job figment, you should be proud of this story. Once i began reading it i couldn't stop. You are a very talented writer.! :)
@ summerdragon I agree! :)
@ mkitte1 Thank you so much!! That means a lot to me. :)
@figment68
EPIC story, mate!
@ km12345 Thank you me matey!
like ye book a lot matey!
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@ clang1 Thank you!! :)
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BananasaurusRex hearted this
This really warmed my heart. This was a really good story, thank you so much for sharing! I'm glad I clicked on this, very, very glad :)
Thanks again! ;P
@ BananasaurusRex Thank you so much!! I am so happy you enjoyed it. :)
Wonderful!
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@ skullhead55 Thank you so much!! :)
nice story dude or girl
@ Mitchellpap Thank you! :) I am a girl.
i am so inspired
@ TosKat Thank you! I'm so happy my story inspired you.
This was a pretty good story. I mostly liked it.
@ ccds17 Thank you for reading my story! :)