The Legend of Fred, the Somewhat Evil Genie
Fred is an unhappy, somewhat evil genie. What happens when he devises a plan to take over Puppet Town?
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Published: Dec. 31, 2011
Updated: Jan. 7, 2012
Total Pages: 22
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I love this story! So cute! I'm glad I was the first to read and "storyspot" it. :)
MrsRex hearted this
figment68 hearted this
Really creative and nice story!
@MrsRex--thank you!!! It was so much fun to make. My husband edited it for me, lol--he had a lot of revisions for me to make, so it took a while to finish.
@Figment--thank you!
"Fred, being evil, left all sorts of pointy things lying around." I literally guffawed when I read that line. Perfect build up and release.
Thoroughly enjoyed this. Very crafty use of Oya's art.
mark hearted this
@Mark, thank you! Your comment means a lot!
@DencMia, thanks!! Lol.
very creative!
I ALWAYS blame the squirrels.
Keep reading,
annatemple
It's so funny!
TheZ0505 hearted this
nice!!!
Very well done. I love the story
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Best Storybird i've ever read :D
Great Job!
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luminiere hearted this
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful. You're a genius!
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Taylex hearted this
nice story
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Cassb hearted this
Amazing story!! I loved it!! Really quirky and funny and I loved many of the lines. Love the ambivalent deer and the rogue squirrels. Fantastic ☺☺☺☺☺
Thanks everyone! Wow, those are some nice comments :) I'm really glad you liked it! Seeing positive comments and hearts makes my day :)))))
@cassb--Thank you! I love your stories so it's an honor!
@luminiere, thank you! What a sweet comment!
@icouldnotthinkofaname, thank you so much!! There are so many fabulous stories here so that's a real compliment!
Ver creative, i love the begining!
bayern hearted this
cute and creative made of sugar and spice and everything nice perfect everything a story needs
Oya hearted this
GREAT story, czikimonkey ! What an imagination ! I love your story, it's well-written and very funny :) Can't wait to read your other stories (about the raging gang of squirrels maybe?), thank you a lot for using my artwork !
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Great book!!!
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Possum99 hearted this
This story made me laugh and laugh!!! ☺ Very creative
wow......................
@Oya--THANK YOU! I am so honored to have a comment from you :)) Thank you so much for creating such amazing artwork!
@Possum99--Thank you!!
@Seraphja--Thanks so much!
@Love2read, Bayern--thank you so much!!
So cute! Where did you come up with this goofy, creative story idea?
Very funny story!!!!! Love the "When in doubt, blame the squirrels" part!!!!
So amazing! That Fred was pure evil!
prety good
@Cherry, I looked at the pictures...and it emerged from there, haha. I had to edit it a lot, though. It took a while!
@Kylieges, thanks! We blame those rascals a lot around here.
@Thewimpykid, yes he was!! Thanks!
@Behol1427, thanks :)
@Kni4, thank you!!!!!
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105drew hearted this
cool
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good job
marymcn123 hearted this
LOVED it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hermione11 hearted this
It was one of the best stories I've read on here!
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this is a crazy story it rocks yahoo
Ronya hearted this
I like you and yore book
HollyTheWelshie hearted this
Love it... :-)
Please keep writing!
You are amazing
it's so hard to put it in words it was so asome
Bpthem hearted this
COOL!!!
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@Everyone, thank you so so so so much! I am so glad you liked Fred's story. He is cackling with glee ;)
@BPTHEM, good to see you on here! Love you!!! (it's my dad....:))
@Bahern, are you who I think you are? If so, hello there! Thank you for the heart!
Thank you so much everyone. Your comments made my week!
this was Different
COOL
One word, AWSOME!
boris2406 hearted this
Cool Story
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lol that is nice
Wow,I didn't think it would as good as it was! I thought genies are always good, but I was mistaken! Great imagination! Well done!
cool its aaaawwwwssssoooommmmmeeeeee
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish i could write that cool
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@Everyone THANKS! I'm so glad you like Fred's story :) I love Oya's artwork so much, isn't it great?! I really really appreciate all of your comments. They make my day!!!
claywacanodd hearted this
I love this story! The rogue squirrels and cat man thrown in really mixed up the story in a great way. Great job!
really great story!!!
iarm8 hearted this
nice
Like the story
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Super doopa story! I need to know somthing...What about the squrrils?
pallil hearted this
Really fun i loved the rougue squirrals!
mjmpolar hearted this
That was REALLY funny!! I love it!
martaviarhodes123 hearted this
Good.
So Funny! Did you make a story about squirrels? Read my stories!!
Vidza hearted this
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hey czikimonkey I also love Oyla's factory's art!
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Nele hearted this
Haha! That was so funny! :)
Great story!
natalie38 hearted this
@Pallil, I don't know about those squirrels....they are pretty pesky. Maybe their doing something they shouldn't be doing right now? Like stealing bird feed? LOL.
@Everyone, thank you so much for your comments :) As always, I am humbled and so thankful that you enjoyed this story.
@FORCE9, your stories are private...you have to make them public if you want people to read them. I'd like to read your stories, so see if you can make them public! :)
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200dk hearted this
Its an awsome story. I loved it. Write more like that
@farog thanks! I will try ;)
This reminds me of Aladdin. Have you watched it? Anyhow, great story!
love it!!!!
gabriellest hearted this
cute
interesting
cool idea of the story!!
justlero hearted this
Wow!! That is so AWESOME!! Fantabulous Mrs MonkeY!! I LUV it!
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Amazing
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:)
cococat24 hearted this
coool
Starz hearted this
When you dont know what to do, blame the squirrels. Very creative
Kool
Its a fantastic story!
Teejee hearted this
It was a nice story because there were alot of fanse things in
the book.
amazing
that was great its like u were a real auther!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
bobsterguy hearted this
nice story!
That was an interesting story. did you make a book for the side stories?
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THAT was too funny
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love this
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it was a really good story
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You are really creative! That is a really good story!
fjohnson hearted this
Please write a second book for this
SeriNurSarah hearted this
i ALWAYS blame the squirrels.
Keep reading,
anna
www. that is eviliy genius good
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I like your pictures
I LIKE IT
WONDERFUL Story. Usually, when something goes wrong, I blame the Squirrels too.
utopia39 hearted this
So interesting! This is a well-written story. Good work!
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why was he in a clothes bin?:)
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MrsRex, how do you storyspot and what is storyspoting?
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Awesome story!
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wow! Wow! WoW! WOW!!!!!!
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that is an awesome story
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That's great! I LUV it!!! I would have never come up with something that clever! Super job!
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hi i just wanna say this is the best book i have ever read. i have added it to my list and i will read all ur stories. you are the best author in the world!!!
amazing.
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wonderful book
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That was REALLY REALLY good!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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A very funny and creative story. I love the squirrels!
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neatest!!!
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"When in doubt, blame the squirrels." Haha, great line.
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Awesome but toooooooo long
Botherthebored hearted this
Haha, this is the best. Write a story about the squirrels.
yeah! i love squirrels