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When I dreamed it all.

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7-9 years
When I dreamed it all.
Am i dreaming? Find out by reading= When i dreamed it all.
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  • When I                       dreamed it all.
  • When I                       dreamed it all.
  • When I                       dreamed it all.
  • When I                       dreamed it all.
  • When I                       dreamed it all.
  • When I                       dreamed it all.
Comments (6) | Hearts (1)
  • RachelSony
    RachelSony says:
    Please comment!!!!
    And give me advice i would love to hear it.
    Thank you for reading:)
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
  • BM12559
    BM12559 says:
    Great story, I really liked it. I wonder if you were dreaming? :D
    A little tip would be to when you use the word 'I' to make sure it is a capital letter. Once again, great.
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
  • kairos
    kairos says:
    A good story! This is the first story I put in my reading list. Not meaning the others is bad though!
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
  • Sparkle11
    Sparkle11 says:
    Good story, brill mixture of realistic and unrealistic dreams. Try to put in more detail! Also please read and comment on my storybirds!!!!!! :)
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
  • katja
    katja says:
    Great story! You should make the ending a bit clearer though.
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
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  • katja
    katja says:
    You're a budding author! :)
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)

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Published: July 20, 2010
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