• Storybird
  • Storybird
Version 0.4

Where's Santa?

Author:
Illustrators:
Age Group:
10-12 years
Pages from this Storybird:
  • Where's Santa?
  • Where's Santa?
  • Where's Santa?
  • Where's Santa?
  • Where's Santa?
  • Where's Santa?
Comments (3) | Hearts (1)
  • choco123
    choco123 says:
    this is a very intresting story
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
  • choco123
    Hearted
    choco123 hearted this
    hearted 30 months ago
  • jmikulski
    jmikulski says:
    Meaning - 4
    Development - 4
    Illustrations - 4
    Mechanics - 2

    Grade: 92
    You did a great job of incorporating Santa/Christmas into a set of pictures that had nothing to do with that! The only problem with your story is a bunch of errors with spelling/grammar/language. Specifically, check pages 1,5, and 6.
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
  • whovey
    whovey says:
    You did a nice job of putting your story together. Next time edit your work. It really distracts from the text to see so many errors.
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)

Log in to post a comment

About this Storybird:

Published: Nov. 25, 2009
Total Pages: 8
Viewed: 24 times
Copyright © All rights reserved
Flag this Storybird