Where's Santa?

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  choco123 says:
  this is a very intresting story

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  hearted 8 months ago
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  jmikulski says:
  Meaning - 4
  Development - 4
  Illustrations - 4
  Mechanics - 2
  
  Grade: 92
  You did a great job of incorporating Santa/Christmas into a set of pictures that had nothing to do with that! The only problem with your story is a bunch of errors with spelling/grammar/language. Specifically, check pages 1,5, and 6.

  Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  whovey says:
  You did a nice job of putting your story together. Next time edit your work. It really distracts from the text to see so many errors.

  Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)

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