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Your memory is my narrative is our story

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Your memory is my narrative is our story
Love is memory.
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  • tandrusiak
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  • tandrusiak
    tandrusiak says:
    So beautiful.
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  • bluedogrose
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  • PaolaZakimi
    PaolaZakimi says:
    just love it!, thank you Mark
    Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
  • mark
    mark says:
    Well, I think I'm supposed to thank you Paola. Couldn't have found those words without your art.
    Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
  • Tahu1
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  • tweetybirdgirl
    tweetybirdgirl says:
    That was a great title i loved it your a true author.
    Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
  • caro9558
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  • caro9558
    caro9558 says:
    I love this. Thank you. This made my day. :)
    Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
  • tweetybirdgirl
    tweetybirdgirl says:
    Hi mark its me tweetybirdgirl again I saw you on vimeo just a minute ago great story.
    Posted 32 months ago (Permalink)
  • Johnrom8
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  • nyx
    nyx says:
    aww, short and simple. yet deep.
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  • strietelmeierr
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  • strietelmeierr
    strietelmeierr says:
    Ditto Mark! POALA's ART IS INSPIRING. Finding words for ideas I've had for a long time. Her ART just inspires the words!
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • emma_meh
    emma_meh says:
    wow i really love this its nice and simple yet so sweet
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • magicpixie
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  • magicpixie
    magicpixie says:
    Oh dear, I feel really guilty now for all the characters in the books i've read in the past then forgotten all about!
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • ele_202
    ele_202 says:
    This is beautiful, and i love it.
    please could you check out my stories and comment on all of them
    cos i want to know what people think of them
    thanks!
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • Madhatter
    Madhatter says:
    COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL is that french "fin" ? that was a great story it kinda (in a totally weird way) scared me well im a bit of a nutter so that was really (a bit) scary yet very good
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • Madhatter
    Madhatter says:
    also i didnt understand that much but you must be one of those writers that makes a image in the readers brain the word i didnt understand was "Narrative"though i am young
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • PatrickStar_Rules
    PatrickStar_Rules says:
    Beautiful story Mark!
    It really is wonderful!
    Keep writing!
    Posted 31 months ago (Permalink)
  • hungribunni
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  • hungribunni
    hungribunni says:
    Succinctly sweet, thought provoking, inspiring
    Your work it lingers
    In the corridors of my memory

    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
  • Plateau
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  • Grade2BH
    Grade2BH says:
    Hey!I'm Brooke Grade 2bh. You commeted On my worst birthday.
    I think the story was wonderful and beautiful!
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
  • mark
    mark says:
    Thanks folks. Much appreciated. Brooke—keep writing. It keeps your brain alive.
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
  • Lizard1212
    Lizard1212 says:
    Sweet
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
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  • kiyoung
    kiyoung says:
    lovely! such a great story :) keep it up !
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
  • mcmurmad
    mcmurmad says:
    Thx soooo much for commenting on my story! I can't believe u actually wrote these! It means alot to me that you commented on my story! apparently your really liked by these ppl! thank you again! Check out more of my stories soon! L8er!
    Posted 30 months ago (Permalink)
  • justme
    justme says:
    A beautiful story...made me smile!.
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Kaydad
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  • Coolguy777
    Coolguy777 says:
    i dont get what the story is about
    Posted 29 months ago (Permalink)
  • class5ism
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  • shesleepswithwolves
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  • shesleepswithwolves
    shesleepswithwolves says:
    This is absolutely devine.
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • Arnotti
    Arnotti says:
    Very lovely mark. I appreciate your deep, geniune words of love. Keeping the memories alive will keep the precious love. KUDOS to you MarK. Very sweet! You must be a fine young man
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • Ferinhator
    Ferinhator says:
    I love how you spread the love mark! It's an awesome story. And it's true!
    Posted 28 months ago (Permalink)
  • zibbycomix
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  • lazydaisy
    lazydaisy says:
    Ohhhh i love that story but not that yet one of my faves
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • nrill1
    nrill1 says:
    A true author.
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
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  • 1566
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    1566
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • Taylorswift122
    Taylorswift122 says:
    awwww that made my day!
    Posted 27 months ago (Permalink)
  • flowermedow
    flowermedow says:
    Beautiful! xxx
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
  • kayla96
    kayla96 says:
    sweeeet! =)
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
  • Forevergirl
    Forevergirl says:
    Cute even though I'm not 13 or +
    Posted 26 months ago (Permalink)
  • tootsierollyumyum
    tootsierollyumyum says:
    yo.
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • tootsierollyumyum
    tootsierollyumyum says:
    =D =) =( =P
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
  • seldom
    seldom says:
    Love it. Deceptively simple, the message lingers.
    Posted 25 months ago (Permalink)
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  • Cymbleyn
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  • PinkKiwi
    PinkKiwi says:
    WOW
    Simple however moving
    Posted 24 months ago (Permalink)
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  • yellow1
    yellow1 says:
    I liked it. Please search yellow1 to find my stories.
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  • Mr_Petra
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  • lolliepop123
    lolliepop123 says:
    love the art you chose. the story was beautiful.
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
  • Jajo11
    Jajo11 says:
    This was so cool :)
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
  • DebraJEdwards
    DebraJEdwards says:
    Hi Debra J. here,

    I love how you used french at the end
    and how you carefully chose the art
    Posted 22 months ago (Permalink)
  • DebraJEdwards
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  • kadomada
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  • kadomada
    kadomada says:
    sweet
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  • lindsay
    lindsay says:
    Lovely!!!
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • Tryshka
    Tryshka says:
    I've a Grandmother with Alzheimers and this speaks to me - and not in a depressing way. Love it!
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • KStar
    KStar says:
    madhatter it stands for finish

    loved the book
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • FrolicAndJoy
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  • stepstep1234
    stepstep1234 says:
    wow. this was sweet and deep. i'm reading this again!
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • greengirl01
    greengirl01 says:
    Your writing is so beautiful!

    (^>^)
    Posted 21 months ago (Permalink)
  • chiquitabanana1
    chiquitabanana1 says:
    It was short but thoughtful.
    Posted 19 months ago (Permalink)
  • ggnola1897
    ggnola1897 says:
    I like it
    Posted 19 months ago (Permalink)
  • EmersonG
    EmersonG says:
    that was so good
    Posted 19 months ago (Permalink)
  • EmersonG
    EmersonG says:
    i am hearting this
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  • EmersonG
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  • EmersonG
    EmersonG says:
    i'm ganna read another one of your stories
    Posted 19 months ago (Permalink)
  • EmersonG
    EmersonG says:
    i love this story i added it to my reading list
    Posted 19 months ago (Permalink)
  • Cathryn82
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  • Cathryn82
    Cathryn82 says:
    Simply beautiful
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  • EmersonG
    EmersonG says:
    awesome book i loved it it is on my reading list i read it every day and when i get sad when my mom lets me down and the computer is free i read it :)
    Posted 18 months ago (Permalink)
  • ParamoreLover7
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  • bblack
    bblack says:
    This is a beautiful story! A bit creepy to me, too, though wonderful. Your stories have a sort of secret ingredient in them, but I can't quite put my finger on it. I'll read "This Gift" and tell you if I realize what the secret ingredient is.
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • figment68
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  • figment68
    figment68 says:
    Love it!
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • TikiMaster21
    TikiMaster21 says:
    Isnt it supposed to be "in our story" instead of "is our story"
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • deepfried_freak
    deepfried_freak says:
    Very nice! :)
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • ChristionnaC
    ChristionnaC says:
    nice
    Posted 15 months ago (Permalink)
  • Soccerrulez
    Soccerrulez says:
    Hey mark! You commented on my story 'Home'. Although that story was short, it spoke so much.
    Posted 14 months ago (Permalink)
  • bookloverjoy
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  • waphooy
    waphooy says:
    Amazing!!!! I agree with Soccerrulez...although the story was short, it spoke so much.

    Hey, how do you get different illustrators like Morphadoodles? Sorry to bother you, but just curious!!

    Great story!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
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  • mark
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    @waphooy: Morphadoodles and a few other artists were part of our initial trial that used low-resolution artwork. They weren't able to upgrade to hi-resolution files after the trial so, for now, their work can't be used.
    Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
  • waphooy
    waphooy says:
    Ok! Thank you Mark...now I'm not so confused. That helped a lot - thanks!
    Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
  • muellermob
    muellermob says:
    That was amazing(: i loved it!
    Check out my stories please?? (i have more than 3... idk y the search says thats all i have...)
    Posted 8 months ago (Permalink)
  • smiles10101
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  • smiles10101
    smiles10101 says:
    Beautiful. Love it.
    Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)
  • Eliza36
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  • Eliza36
    Eliza36 says:
    Very meaningful!~Eliza36
    Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)
  • Picklereader
    Picklereader says:
    AMAZIN!!! HEY SO I LIKE TALKING IN ALL CAPS!!!!!!
    Posted 7 months ago (Permalink)
  • waphooy
    waphooy says:
    Just thought I'd thank you for taking the time to make such an amazing website (which now we refer to as Storybird:)!
    I'm just fascinated at how many authors have joined Storybird...those young writers get to play around with writing, and find out more about themselves. Who knows? They could get so interested in writing, they would become pro authors. I am having so much fun here. :) I just love writing and when I found Storybird, I knew it was going to be wonderful! I haven't found a better story-writing website.
    Thanks very much again.
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
  • mark
    mark says:
    @waphooy: glad you're liking it here :)
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
  • miska
    miska says:
    Just lovely!
    Posted 6 months ago (Permalink)
  • miska
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  • RoCkOuT99
    RoCkOuT99 says:
    Mark~
    That was beautiful! The way you used the art, your words, everything! It was short and sweet! It had so very little-but spoke so much! I really enjoyed your book!


    ~Rocky♫
    Posted 5 months ago (Permalink)
  • sonic1234567890
    sonic1234567890 says:
    sweet
    Posted 3 months ago (Permalink)
  • dogbird
    dogbird says:
    nice story
    Posted 2 months ago (Permalink)
  • bookworm320
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  • candycaneemma
    candycaneemma says:
    Great Job, you are an amazing writer, keep it up!
    By the way, I am having a community writing competition, and would just love if you could enter! If you click on my name you will see a story "Community writing competition" If you click on it, all the instructions will be in the story. Please leave your story in the comments page so I can read it (with the other judges). Judging will be on the 4th of June. We are looking for three judges, first come first serve, so if you want to leave a message on the comments page to request a judging position, also, if you have a question, leave it on the comments page andI will get back to you. GOOD LUCK!
    Posted 4 weeks ago (Permalink)
  • czikimonkey
    czikimonkey says:
    I really liked this one. The art--and your words--remind me of The Little Prince. (I adore Paola's art and wish there was more of it.) I loved the simplistic yet intellectual story here--something so deep and yet so starkly expressed. Beautifully done, like a haunting melody played by a single instrument.
    Posted 3 weeks ago (Permalink)
  • Viv3L
    Viv3L says:
    thats coolio
    Posted 3 days ago (Permalink)

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Published: Sept. 29, 2009
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